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Today, I would like to talk about veganism through a beautiful personal experience in my family.
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Today, I would like to talk about veganism through a beautiful personal experience in my family.
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My wonderful grandmother decided to adopt a strict plant-based diet several decades ago.
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At first, many relatives felt quite worried about her physical health because they believed that meat was necessary for older people.
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However, my grandmother successfully proved everyone wrong by staying incredibly strong,
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active and cheerful every single day.
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Her skin always looks bright and her gentle eyes are constantly full of positive energy.
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She teaches me that cooking with fresh vegetables,
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mushrooms, and tofu can create wonderful meals without harming any living animals.
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Her peaceful lifestyle inspiration secretly changes the way my family thinks about our daily nutrition choices.
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We realize that a long-term vegan diet is completely possible and brings amazing benefits for our human body.
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Looking at her long, happy life helps me understand that gentle eating is a true blessing.
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This simple observation makes me respect her great discipline
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and feel deeply motivated to reduce my own meat consumption for a healthier future.

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์ด ์ˆ˜์—…์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ

์ด๋ฒˆ ์ˆ˜์—…์—์„œ๋Š” ๋น„๊ฑด ์‹๋‹จ๊ณผ ๊ทธ ์ด์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฐธ๊ฐ€์ž๋Š” ๊ฐ€์กฑ์˜ ์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์‹์ƒํ™œ์˜ ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ์˜์–‘ ์„ ํƒ์— ๋ฏธ์น˜๋Š” ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ์œ ํŠœ๋ธŒ ์˜์–ด ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•ด ์ƒ๋ช…์ฒด๋ฅผ ํ•ด์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์‹์‚ฌ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต ๋ฐ IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ & ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ

  • veganism - ๋น„๊ฑด์ฃผ์˜
  • plant-based diet - ์‹๋ฌผ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜ ์‹๋‹จ
  • physical health - ์‹ ์ฒด ๊ฑด๊ฐ•
  • fresh vegetables - ์‹ ์„ ํ•œ ์ฑ„์†Œ
  • tofu - ๋‘๋ถ€
  • discipline - ๊ทœ์œจ
  • nutrition choices - ์˜์–‘ ์„ ํƒ

์—ฐ์Šต ํŒ

์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฃฌ ์†๋„์™€ ํ†ค์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฐ˜ํ–ฅ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. shadow speech ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋น„๋””์˜ค์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š” ๋А๋ฆฌ๊ฒŒ ๋ฐœ์Œํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด ์ ์ฐจ ์›๋ž˜ ์†๋„๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํŒจ๋Ÿฌํ”„๋ ˆ์ด์ง•์„ ์‹œ๋„ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๋ฉด์„œ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋ชฉ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์€ ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ๋น„๊ฑด ์‹๋‹จ์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์— ๋”์šฑ ๊นŠ์ด๋ฅผ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์น˜ IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์‹œํ—˜์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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