์‰๋„์ž‰ ์—ฐ์Šต: JJ is Creating a New World, BUT... ๐Ÿคฏ - ์˜์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ธฐ

์—ฐ์Šต ๋ชจ๋“œ ์„ ํƒ

๊ฐ ๋ชจ๋“œ๋Š” ์ „์ฒด ํ™”๋ฉด ์—ฐ์Šต์‹ค๋กœ ์—ด๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

14 ๋ฌธ์žฅ
๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์งง๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ธธ๋ฉด Edit๋ฅผ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ ์กฐ์ •ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
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Hmm, I wonder how the world generation works.
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Good morning!
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It is time to get to work!
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Let's go!
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Faster!
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We need to do this faster!
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Go!
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Come on!
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We can do it!
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Together we are strong!
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We must build this world as fast as possible!
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Come on, go!
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We will succeed!
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I'm sorry.

์•ฑ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ

์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ

AI ๋ฐœ์Œ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋ฌธ์žฅ๋งˆ๋‹ค ์ ์ˆ˜ ํ™•์ธ
IPA ๋ฐœ์Œ ์—ฐ์Šต๋ชจ๋“  ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐ
๋‹จ์–ด ํ•™์Šต๋‚˜๋งŒ์˜ ๋‹จ์–ด์žฅ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ
๋‹จ์–ด ๊ฒŒ์ž„๋†€๋ฉด์„œ ์™ธ์šฐ๊ธฐ

๊ฐ™์€ ์ฑ„๋„

FOR YOU

์ถ”์ฒœ ์˜์ƒ

์ด ๋ ˆ์Šจ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด

"JJ is Creating a New World, BUT... ๐Ÿคฏ"์œผ๋กœ ์‰๋„์ž‰ ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋งค์ผ 15~30๋ถ„ ๊พธ์ค€ํžˆ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋ฉด IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ๊ธธ๋Ÿฌ์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด ์˜์ƒ์˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•

ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋งŽ์ด ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฌธํ˜•์„ ์˜์ƒ ์† ์‹ค์ œ ํ‘œํ˜„๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ •๋ฆฌํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋ฌธํ˜•์˜์ƒ ์† ํ‘œํ˜„
์˜๋ฌด: must / have to / need to ์–ด๋–ค ์ผ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ๋•Œneed to do ยท must build
โ€œwillโ€ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜ will + ๋™์‚ฌ โ€” ๊ฒฐ์ •, ์•ฝ์† ๋˜๋Š” ์˜ˆ์ธกwill succeed

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์„€๋„์ž‰ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•: ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ณ„ ์ „์ฒด ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ ์ฝ๊ธฐ โ†’