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Leisure time is an important part of our daily life.
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Leisure time is an important part of our daily life.
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It is the time when we relax and enjoy activities that make us happy.
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During my leisure time, I like reading books,
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listening to music, watching movies, or taking a walk.
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Sometimes I spend time with friends and family.
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Leisure activities help reduce stress and give us more energy after work or study.
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I believe having free time is important because it helps us feel balanced,
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relaxed, and ready for new challenges in life.

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์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ์ƒํ™œ์—์„œ ์•„์ฃผ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ๋‚จ์•„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํœด์‹์„ ์ทจํ•˜๊ณ , ํ–‰๋ณต์„ ์ฃผ๋Š” ํ™œ๋™์„ ์ฆ๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐ๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ž์‹ ์ด ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์Œ์•…์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ , ์˜ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋ณด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์‚ฐ์ฑ…์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ํ™œ๋™์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” ์นœ๊ตฌ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€์กฑ๊ณผ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ๋„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ํ™œ๋™์€ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๊ณ , ์ผ์ด๋‚˜ ํ•™์—… ํ›„ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์žฌ์ถฉ์ „ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ž์œ  ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์€ ๊ท ํ˜•์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ , ํŽธ์•ˆํ•จ์„ ๋А๋ผ๋ฉฐ ์‚ถ์˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋„์ „์— ๋Œ€๋น„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ์„ ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ๋ฐœ์Œ ๊ต์ •์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ˆ™๋‹ฌ๋œ ์—ฐ์Šต ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ผ์ƒ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ 5๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ

  • Leisure time is an important part of our daily life. โ€“ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ์ƒํ™œ์—์„œ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • It is the time when we relax and enjoy activities that make us happy. โ€“ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํœด์‹์„ ์ทจํ•˜๊ณ  ํ–‰๋ณต์„ ์ฃผ๋Š” ํ™œ๋™์„ ์ฆ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Leisure activities help reduce stress. โ€“ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ํ™œ๋™์€ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • I spend time with friends and family. โ€“ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์นœ๊ตฌ์™€ ๊ฐ€์กฑ๊ณผ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋ƒ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Having free time is important. โ€“ ์ž์œ  ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ณ„ ์‰๋„์ž‰ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ

์ด๋ฒˆ ์˜์ƒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ , shadowspeak์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ณ„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋ฉฐ ๋ฐœ์Œ์„ ๊ต์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋” ์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

  1. ์˜์ƒ ์‹œ์ฒญ: ๋จผ์ € ์˜์ƒ์„ ์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•˜์—ฌ ์ „๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ํ™œ๋™์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ฃผ์˜ ๊นŠ๊ฒŒ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
  2. ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ฝ๊ธฐ: ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๊ณ , ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋‹จ์œ„๋กœ ๋ฉˆ์ถฐ์„œ ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ์˜์–ด ๋ฐœ์Œ ๊ต์ •์„ ์—ผ๋‘์— ๋‘๊ณ  ๋ฐœ์Œ์„ ๊ผผ๊ผผํžˆ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  3. ์‰๋„์ž‰ ์—ฐ์Šต: ์˜์ƒ์˜ ์Œ์„ฑ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ง์ ‘ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๋ฐœ์Œ๊ณผ ์–ต์–‘์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๋ฉฐ shadow speak ์Šคํƒ€์ผ๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  4. ๋ฐ˜๋ณต ํ•™์Šต: ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋ฒˆ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฐœ์Œ๊ณผ ์–ต์–‘์„ ์ตํžˆ๊ณ , ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋А๋ผ๋Š” ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  5. ์ž๊ธฐ ํ‰๊ฐ€: ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋ฐœ์Œ์„ ๋…น์Œํ•˜๊ณ , ์›๋ณธ ์˜์ƒ๊ณผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์–ด๋–ค ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ฐœ์„ ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์œ ํŠœ๋ธŒ ์˜์–ด ๊ณต๋ถ€์˜ ํšจ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๊ทน๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ , ์ฆ๊ฒ๊ฒŒ ํ•™์Šตํ•˜์„ธ์š”!

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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