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There was an old man.
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There was an old man.
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He had three sons.
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The sons were very lazy.
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The old man was worried.
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One day he became very sick.
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He called his son.
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He told them about a taser.
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The taser was hidden in the field.
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The old man died after some days.
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The sons wanted the treasure.
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They went to the field.
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They dug the whole field.
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They searched everywhere.
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They could not find any treasure.
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They felt sad and tired.
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They planted seeds in the field.
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The crops grew very well.
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The sons sold the crops.
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They earned a lot of money.
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They learned that hard work is the real treasure.
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The moral of the story is,
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hard work is the real treasure.
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If you like my videos,
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please please like, share and subscribe.
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Thank you.

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์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š”?

์ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋Š” 'ํ•˜๋“œ ์›Œํฌ๊ฐ€ ์ง„์ •ํ•œ ๋ณด๋ฌผ์ด๋‹ค'๋ผ๋Š” ๊ตํ›ˆ์„ ๋‹ด๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์˜์ƒ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋ฉด, ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ๋Œ€ํ™” ์†์—์„œ ์ž์ฃผ ์“ฐ์ด๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ตํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ, ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ์˜ ๊ฐ์ •๊ณผ ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ shadow speech ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ๋ฐœ์Œ๊ณผ ์–ต์–‘์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋”์šฑ ์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์†Œํ†ตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ์–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋ฌธ๋งฅ ์† ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๋ถ„์„

  • ๊ณผ๊ฑฐํ˜• ์‚ฌ์šฉ: "The old man died after some days." ์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์—์„œ๋Š” ๊ณผ๊ฑฐํ˜•์ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜์—ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์‚ฌ๊ฑด์˜ ์—ฐ์†์„ฑ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ๋ฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์กฐ๊ฑด๋ฌธ: "If you like my videos, please like, share and subscribe." ์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์กฐ๊ฑด๋ฌธ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์‹œ์ฒญ์ž์—๊ฒŒ ํ–‰๋™์„ ์œ ๋„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™”์—์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์—ญํ• ์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์˜๋„ ํ‘œํ˜„: "The sons wanted the treasure." ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ๋Š” ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์˜๋„๋ฅผ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋ƒ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์š”์†Œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด, IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์—๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ๋“ค์„ ๋ฐ˜๋ณต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ”ํ•œ ๋ฐœ์Œ ํ•จ์ •

๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ ๋ฐœ์Œ์ด ์–ด๋ ค์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ 'treasure'์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์Œ์ ˆ์ด ๋Š˜์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ๋ฐœ์Œ์„ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ๋”ฐ๋ผํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, 'hard work'์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ, ๋‘ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ถ™์—ฌ ๋ฐœ์Œํ•  ๋•Œ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์–ต์–‘์„ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ, ์˜์–ด ๋ฐœ์Œ ๊ต์ •์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž์ฃผ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜๊ณ  ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ์˜ ๋Œ€ํ™”์—์„œ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์„ ๋†’์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ข…ํ•ฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ, ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ๋ณด๋‹ค ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ฃจ์–ด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๋ฐœ์Œ๊ณผ ์–ต์–‘์€ ์‹ค์ œ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ํ•  ๋•Œ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋ฏ€๋กœ, ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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