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TOEFL writing task three writing for an online academic discussion let's take a deep dive into this topic

so I didn't want to do a whole bunch of different videos this is the video

if you want to score high on this particular TOEFL writing task watch this video over

and over and over

but more importantly practice what you learn in the video it's

important okay test format make sure you understand the actual TOEFL exam.

So with this writing task, you have a professor's post, two student posts, 10 minutes total,

and you're trying to write around 100 to 140 words.

You respond and then engage.

You must respond to the professor's question and engage with at least one student.

This is not optional.

Engagement is part of the score.

You have to contribute something new to the discussion.

What the TOEFL is really testing here,

clear position, strong support, logical flow, academic tone, new contribution.

Summarizing is not enough.

TOEFL wants to see that you add something new to the discussion.

High score structure.

So to get a high score of five out of five, you need to state your position.

You have a reason plus example.

You respond to a classmate.

You have a short conclusion.

This structure, believe it or not, it works for almost every academic discussion prompt.

sentence one state your position i'll give you some examples of how you can do this

so you need to look at these sentences practice them make

them the your own personalize them that's part of the purpose

of this video is to give you a lot of different sentences

that you can use to help you complete this type of writing task i agree with student a

because the explanation clearly shows i agree with student a

because the example they provided helps clarify i agree with student a

because their point about i disagree with student b

because the argument focuses on i disagree with student b because the example they mentioned

so your position must be clear in the first sentence

so don't wait state your position very clearly right in the

beginning okay here are some more examples of what you can do in the beginning

when you state your position i disagree with student b

because they overlook i partially agree

but i think the issue is more complex than i partially agree

but the solution would only work i partially agree

but additional research would be necessary i partially agree but i would argue that the opposing viewpoint.

So I gave you at least 10 here.

These are 10 good sentence starters to help you state your position, which is the first thing you want to do with this writing task.

Okay, how about sentences two through four, reason plus example.

A lot of students, it's the example that kills them.

They give no example.

So here's how you can do this the professor's post highlights

this through the professor explains this by referencing the idea appears

in the professor's example the professor's question implies this outcome the lecture supports this point by

and maybe not lecture but you could say the the one of the discussion posts

or the professor's post students a post illustrates this clearly student

a gives a concrete example student a connects this to the reading

or to the other post students a's explanation helps clarify why

and then student b raises a contrasting example

so this is how you you you do your sentences two through four

so that you actually engage with both the professor

and the student's posts so examples are the difference between a three and a five use real experiences,

not vague ideas.

So let's talk about other example sentences that you can show here.

And the purpose here is you mention a reason plus an example continue.

Student B's post shows a limitation, blah, blah, blah.

Student B focuses on a different factor.

One point from student A shows.

A detail in student B's response suggests this aligns with a professor's original claim.

This extends the idea from student A.

This challenges the assumption student B makes.

The professor's scenario demonstrates this effect.

Student A's reasoning is supported when student B's example reveals a weakness, blah, blah, blah.

So there you go here are example type sentences you can

use once you get past stating the position these are great sentences you can use two through four

so let's take a look at an example you have a

real concrete example driven post high scoring let's look at it together here I agree with a professor

that flexible work schedules can increase productivity especially when employees are trusted to manage their time.

This is clear in the professor's example of technology companies allowing hybrid work.

For instance, the professor mentions that employees who can choose

when to work often complete tasks more efficiently because they avoid peak stress hours.

Student A also supports this idea by pointing out

that fewer interruptions at home can improve focus in real world real world situation now this is very important

because this is

when you contribute you add something new don't forget this part

right a parrot can repeat what everybody else has already said

you're not a parrot right in real world situations this can be seen

when fewer employees schedules demanding tasks during the most productive hours such as early morning

or late evening additionally research from organizational psychology shows

that autonomy often leads to higher motivation

while some structure is still necessary the examples from both the professor

and student a demonstrate that flexibility

when paired with accountability can lead to measurable improvements in performance

so that last sentence while some structure blah blah blah

that synthesis you're now taking the professor's post

and then one of the student's post and then combining that to your own ideas.

That's genius.

That's going to get you a super high score.

Why this works.

Clear position, specific references to professor and student, concrete examples and cause of ecologic, academic, but natural tome.

Example two.

This is not what you want this is vague abstract analysis

only post right low scoring now i wanted to keep it about the same word

so you can see you can write a lot

and say absolutely nothing right so just because you have 100

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or 150 words does not guarantee a high score i agree

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that flexible work schedules are generally beneficial because they can help people work better many studies suggest that flexibility is important,

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and this idea is widely discussed in modern workplaces.

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Student A also seems to agree that flexibility has advantages, which shows that this is a common opinion.

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In general, people prefer having choices, and this can improve how they feel about their work.

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Productivity is influenced by many factors, so flexible schedules can be helpful in different ways.

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Overall, this topic is complex and there are multiple perspectives to consider.

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While flexibility may not work for everyone, it still plays an important role in today's society.

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Therefore, it is reasonable to say that flexible schedules can have positive effects depending on the situation.

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So what have we done here?

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Nothing.

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Why this fails?

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No specific example from professor or students the the writer does mention the student

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but doesn't give anything specific repeats ideas without developing them abstract language many studies in general

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so it sounds safe right but it's empty it's kind of like

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that friend that you know how are you you know he says i'm fine

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but you never get past that first level of um conversation that's that's superficial talk.

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You need to get deep into your discussion, and this is not the way to do it here.

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Okay, sentences five through six, so you need to respond to a classmate.

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You need to show that you read the other posts.

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Mention students by name.

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How do you do that?

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I'm going to give you a whole bunch of examples.

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Student A raises a strong point.

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However, student A's example is useful, but student A focuses on one factor.

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Yet, student A's argument is convincing.

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Still, student A identifies an issue.

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Nevertheless, while student B argues this, I think, while student B emphasizes efficiency,

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I, Okay, student B presents an alternative view.

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However, student B's reasoning makes sense,

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but student B overlooks an important limitation. So let's keep going.

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Here are some more examples.

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Remember, we're focusing on the sentence, the fifth and the sixth sentence in your academic discussion.

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What is it going to look like?

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Here are more examples.

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Student B assumes this applies universally,

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yet student B's conclusion differs from mine because I agree with student A overall,

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but I agree with student B to some extent, however.

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Compared to student A's view, I, in contrast to student B's claim, I, student A and I share a view, but.

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Student B raises a concern worth considering.

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However, student A provides support, though.

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Student B's point is valid in theory, but.

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You see how it works?

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So now you have sentences one through three, one through six figured out.

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Remember, practice writing these types of sentences until you're comfortable creating a 100 to 150 word discussion post.

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Final sentence wrap up.

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What does that final sentence look like?

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You just need one.

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How about here's some examples.

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For these reasons, this approach is more effective.

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For these reasons, I support the professor's position.

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For these reasons, student A's view is stronger.

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Overall, I believe this solution is practical.

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Overall, I believe this argument is well -supported.

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Overall, I believe the evidence favors this view.

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This is why flexibility leads to better outcomes.

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This is why the professor's conclusion is convincing.

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This is why student -age reasoning is persuasive.

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Taken together, these points support my position.

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Remember, one good concluding sentence will get the job done.

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Here are some more examples of how to wrap it up.

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Taken together, the examples justify this conclusion.

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Taken together, this discussion favors this approach.

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In conclusion, the evidence supports this claim.

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In conclusion, this perspective best fits the evidence.

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In conclusion, this view addresses the key concerns.

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As a result, this argument remains the strongest.

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As a result, this solution seems most realistic.

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Therefore, this position is more convincing.

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Therefore, the professor's view is justified.

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Therefore, this explanation best answers the question.

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Remember, use these and then kind of play around with them a bit.

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If you're watching this video, you probably have advanced grammar, right? would be watching in the first place

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so as you practice trust me you'll begin to combine these sentences

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or mix certain templates with other templates and you'll develop your own personal style

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that will work okay let's take a look at a sample five out of five response breakdown right

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so you have a professor's post on financial literacy and then you'll read many universities

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graduates struggle with debt budgeting and long -term financial planning.

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Some argue that universities should require all students to complete a financial literacy course

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while others believe students should be free to choose what they study.

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In your opinion, should financial literacy be a required course at universities?

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Why or why not?

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So this is basically the professor's question.

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On the TOEFL, you see like an avatar.

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You see a picture of a professor.

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So everything that you write needs to answer this.

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In particular, you need to focus on that in your opinion should blah, blah, blah.

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That's very important.

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So then you'll read two students' posts connected to the professors.

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writing prompt.

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So student A says, I think financial literacy should be required because many students graduate without knowing how to manage credit cards,

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loans, or interest.

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A required course could prevent serious financial mistakes later in life.

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Then student B says, I disagree with requiring financial literacy courses.

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Students already have many mandatory classes And universities should allow them to choose subjects that match their career goals.

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You see how it works?

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So typically, one student will agree with the idea, and then the other student will disagree.

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Then you now have to figure out your position.

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And that's when you state your position.

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So this is going to score really high.

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So this response, it's incorporating everything I've showed you so far in this video.

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I believe financial literacy should be a required course at universities because many students graduate without essential money management skills.

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The professor's post highlights problems such as debt and poor budgeting, which often affect graduates long after college.

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For example, students may have to take out loans or use credit cards without fully understanding interest rates, leading to long -term financial stress.

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Student A correctly notes that a required course could prevent serious mistakes later in life.

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While student B argues that students already have too many required classes,

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I believe financial literacy is different from most electives because it applies to all careers, not just specific majors.

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And this is when you're adding something new, exactly here.

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Even students who study engineering or art must manage rent, loans, and savings.

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For these reasons, requiring a basic financial literacy course would better prepare students for real -world responsibilities after graduation.

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So notice the response.

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It states a position, gives a concrete example, and responds directly to one of the students.

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And of course, it acknowledges what the professor has also said.

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So here is a low scoring response that will not get a five.

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It's not going to get 30 points.

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This is probably between two and three.

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I think financial literacy is an important topic and both students make good points.

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Student A says it helps students manage money better, which is true.

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And student B says students already have many required courses.

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I agree that learning about money is useful, but students should also have freedom in choosing their classes.

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Universities should try to balance these ideas so students can learn what they need.

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So what's the problem here?

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Well, there's a big problem.

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There's no clear stance.

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The writer never clearly agrees or disagrees.

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There's no concrete example everything is general

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and abstract it's mostly summary repeats both students instead of contributing

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and does it even mention the professor at all it doesn't

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it's a weak organization there's no clear structure no development there's

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no academic engagement no challenge there's no extension of anything there's no new idea

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so this response sounds okay

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but it doesn't add anything knew it mostly repeats what student a

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and b already said and it never gives a real example

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or a clear position so because of that this is not going to score higher than three

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now let's do some practice what is the popular saying hearing is good seeing is better but doing is best

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so why don't you take out some paper

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or maybe on your computer write a 150 word response to this practice prompt

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that you can compare with the example i provide in the video

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so the professor says universities often emphasize academic success

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but they also play a role in supporting students physical

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and mental well -being some educators argue that requiring physical fitness courses encourages healthy habits,

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reduces stress, and improves academic performance.

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Others believe students should have the freedom to decide how they manage their own health outside the classroom.

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In your opinion, could universities require physical fitness courses for all students?

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Explain your position and respond to at least one classmate's idea.

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And by the way, I'm a professor at California State University of San Bernardino, and in most of my discussion posts,

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I have to reply to at least two students' posts.

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Okay, student A says here, I believe physical fitness courses should be required because many students become inactive due to academic pressure.

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Regular exercise can reduce stress, improve concentration, and support mental health.

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A structured course would help students build healthy habits that continue after graduation.

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So that's the first student who agrees with the idea.

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Student B disagrees.

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And student B says this.

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I disagree with requiring fitness courses because students have different schedules, abilities, and health needs some students already exercise on their own

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while others prefer activities outside formal classes universities should allow students

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to choose how they stay healthy instead of forcing a requirement so write a quick response to that

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now you can compare what you wrote to this so here is an example a five out of five academic response.

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So you have the position is clearly stated, the student mentions or acknowledges a professor's ideas,

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and then the student integrates and acknowledges student A and student B and then gives new information to the discussion.

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How does that sound?

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I believe universities should require physical fitness courses because they support both physical and mental well -being.

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The professor emphasizes that universities have a role beyond academics, which includes helping students manage stress.

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For example, regular exercise has been shown to improve focus and reduce anxiety, especially during demanding academic terms.

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Student A also notes that structured fitness courses can help students develop long -term healthy habits.

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While Student B argues that students should choose how to manage their health, I believe a basic fitness requirement does not remove choice,

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but instead ensures that all students receive guidance on safe and effective exercise.

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Many students want to be active, but lack knowledge or motivation without clear structure.

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For these reasons, a fitness,

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a required fitness course can provide essential support while still allowing students flexibility in how they stay healthy.

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There you go.

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So why this response scores five out of five?

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You have a clear stance.

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The writer clearly supports requiring fitness courses.

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There is no doubt.

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There's a concrete example stress reduction and academic focus are explained.

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Engagement, direct response to student B, not just agreement with student A.

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And I like how in this one, the student acknowledges student B's idea, but then refutes it.

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I thought that was really good.

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New reasoning added, emphasizes guidance and structure, not repetition.

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There's an academic tone plus transitions.

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It helps the ideas for logically and it helps the writer stay on topic.

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So how'd you do on that one?

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How did your model, how did your actual writing compare to the model I just presented?

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So let's do it again.

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Remember, um, hearing is good.

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Seeing is better, but doing is best.

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So your goal here is to do another, maybe 100 to 150 word discussion post based on practice prompt number two.

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The topic, should universities limit students' use of AI tools?

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So the professor says, artificial intelligence tools are becoming common in academic settings, especially for research, writing, and problem solving.

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Some educators believe universities should limit students' use of AI to protect academic integrity and critical thinking skills.

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Others argue that AI is a valuable learning tool that students must learn to use responsibly.

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In your opinion, student universities restrict students' use of AI tools.

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Explain your position and respond to at least one classmate's idea. So student A says,

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I think universities should limit AI use because students may rely on it too much instead of developing their own skills.

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If AI tools are unrestricted, students might stop practicing critical thinking and academic writing which are essential for long -term learning.

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Student B says, I disagree with limiting AI tools because they can support learning when used correctly.

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Many students use AI to brainstorm ideas or check understanding, not to cheat.

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Universities should teach responsible use rather than banning or restricting these tools.

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Now, compare your model, your writing, to this example here.

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So this would get a very high score.

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I believe universities should not strictly limit students' use of AI tools, but instead focus on responsible use.

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The professor's post highlights concerns about academic integrity, which are important, but AI can also support learning when used appropriately.

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For example, students may use AI to generate practice questions or clarify difficult concepts, which can improve understanding.

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Student B also argues that AI is often used as a support tool rather than a replacement for thinking.

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While student A is correct that over -reliance is a risk, clear guidelines and instruction can reduce misuse without banning helpful technology.

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Since AI tools are already common in many professional fields, universities have a responsibility to prepare students to use them ethically.

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For these reasons, teaching responsible AI use is more effective than strict limitations.

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So why this score is a five?

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Let's look at the most important aspects of the writing

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and this is what you want to look for when you're evaluating your own writing.

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Clear position stated early in the first two lines,

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concrete academic example, direct response to both students and the professor, adds new reasoning beyond classmates,

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consistent academic tone and organization.

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so how about a mini test you you got even more

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practice how about do this one read the post the two students uh responses to the post

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and then write your own and i'm going to go over it right now

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so uh academic discussion discussion scoring zero to five so the topic is should universities require group projects in most courses.

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The professor says, some professors believe group projects prepare students for teamwork in professional settings,

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while others argue they create unequal workloads and grading issues.

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In your opinion, should group projects be required in most university classes.

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Respond to at least one classmate.

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Student A says, I believe group projects should be required because they help students develop collaboration and communication skills.

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In many careers, employees must work in teams, solve problems together, and manage shared responsibilities.

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Group projects allow students to practice these skills before entering professional environments.

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Student B says, I disagree with requiring group projects in most courses because they're often unfair.

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Some students end up doing more work than others, which can affect grades and motivation.

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Even with rules, it is difficult to ensure equal participation in group -based assignments.

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Pause the video and write your response.

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now in a minute you can compare your response to five different attempts to this assignment

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and the first one is uh one and then we go to two then three then four then five

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now i pray that your response does not look like this

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if it if it does it's a one Group projects can be good or bad.

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Some students like them and some do not.

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Student A thinks they are helpful, but student B disagrees.

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It depends on the situation.

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Notice how this is a completely grammatically correct writing.

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It's a score of one.

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Why?

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It mentions students but does not engage with ideas.

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There's no clear opinion.

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This is good or bad.

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No examples or explanation.

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Very limited development.

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This is not where you want to be.

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How does your writing compare to this one?

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If it does, you get a score of two.

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It's underdeveloped, but it's certainly better than the one.

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I think group projects can help students work together.

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Student A says they improve communication, which is true in some cases.

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However, Student B is also correct that some students do more work.

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Group projects are common in universities.

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So why does this score a 2?

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Position is unclear and inconsistent.

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No concrete example.

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Mentioned students, but adds no new reasoning.

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Ideas are listed, not developed.

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Now we're at the three.

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Does yours look like this?

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This is what we call adequate but basic.

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I believe group projects should be used sometimes, but not in every course.

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Student A is right that teamwork skills are important for future jobs.

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However, Student B correctly points out that group projects can be unfair.

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when work is not equally shared in my opinion professors should carefully design group projects to avoid these problems

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so why does this get a score of three this is

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probably where a lot of people are going to be I think is between three

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and four so there is a clear position

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and the student responds to both positions or both students

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but lacks specific examples and the reasoning is reasonable but general

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and very abstract so there's not a lot there

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if I'm sitting down to eat dinner I feel like I'm only getting a salad I'm eating

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and I'm getting some nourishment but I'm missing the main course that's how I feel when I see this one

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now is your writing a score of four does it look like this this is strong

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but limited depth so I believe group projects should be required in some courses

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because they help students develop collaboration skills student a correctly explains

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that teamwork is important for professional environments for example many jobs require employees to work in teams to solve problems However,

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student B raises a valid concern about unequal workloads.

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To address this issue, professors could include peer evaluations to ensure fairness.

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Overall, group projects can be effective when designed carefully.

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So why this score is a five?

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I mean a four.

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Clear stance, concrete example included, responds directly to student B, could add a deeper explanation, a broader insight.

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I think it needs to acknowledge the professor's ideas more also, I think would be helpful.

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I think that's one of the key differences between the four and the five.

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The five acknowledges the professor and the two students post.

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So if you did this, if your writing looks like this, congratulations.

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So score five, it means that you're fully developed it's a high -scoring response.

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Let's look what it looks like.

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I believe group projects should be required in some university courses because they prepare students for real -world collaboration.

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The professor notes that teamwork is a key professional skill which student A supports by emphasizing communication and cooperation.

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Did you guys see that right there?

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We have two different sources, the professor and his ideas plus student A's ideas.

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That's synthesis integrating both.

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It says, for example, many workplaces employees must coordinate tasks and meet shared deadlines similar to academic group projects.

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And now the student acknowledges student B.

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While student B argues that group work can be unfair, this problem often results from poor structure rather than the concept itself,

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professors can reduce inequality by assigning clear roles or using peer evaluations.

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For these reasons, well -designed group projects offer valuable learning experiences without the drawbacks. that student B describes.

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So why this score is five?

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You have a clear, confident position, specific real -world example, direct engagement with both students.

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It adds new reasoning, not just repetition, so it has more depth and has a logical flow and academic tone.

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So when I think about when I think about the two or the three, if I'm thinking about eating a meal, it's kind of like this.

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If you score two or three, I'm sitting down to eat dinner.

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I expect to get an appetizer or a salad.

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I'm looking for a main course and then I'm looking for dessert.

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so if you're writing at the two

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or the three level i kind of feel like i'm sitting down to eat dinner

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but i'm only getting a salad however the one

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that scores a four i feel like i've i've gotten the the appetizer i've eaten my salad

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and i'm beginning to eat my main course

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but i don't really have a dessert but the score five

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that when i'm fully satisfied i have my salad my appetizer I had the main course I'm very happy with,

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and then I have a dessert even after that.

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So I am fully satisfied, you know, 1 ,800 calories later.

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How about that?

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That's what the five is to me.

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You want to look at it like that.

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Now let's take a look at the templates.

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Now be careful.

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I'm going to give you 10 templates with different rhetorical kind of purposes.

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This one is called example, agree, plus example, plus respond.

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So these are flexible.

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You want to personalize them any way you can, right?

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So with this one, you'll say something like, I agree with a professor that, your position, this is because,

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main reason, which is clearly connected to the issue raised in the prompt.

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For example, specific example or situation illustrates why this approach is effective.

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Student A also supports this view by noting, then student A's idea, while student B raises an important concern about student B's point,

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I believe the issue can be addressed by your response.

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For these reasons, clear concluding judgment.

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And remember, these are safe, flexible templates.

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Personalize them.

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Now, I think it's important here that you write these down.

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I would even handwrite them because you want to feel the vocabulary and the grammar of the templates.

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You don't want to just copy and paste them.

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That's why I'm not putting the templates in the description below the video.

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It's better that you write them down, and that's part of the learning process.

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Template number two, how about a partial agreement focus?

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While I generally agree with the professor's position, I think the situation is more complex.

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The main reason is that reason, which affects how the policy works in practice.

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For instance, concrete example shows both benefits and limitations.

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Student A highlights student A's idea, which is convincing.

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However, student B correctly points out student B's concern overall and then present a balanced conclusion.

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And that gives you the template number two.

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Template three is disagree respectfully.

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I disagree with the idea that professors claim

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because reason this can be seen when specific example

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which suggests a different outcome student b supports this view by

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explaining student b's idea although student a argues student a's claim this reasoning overlooks limitation therefore final stance

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that would be disagreeing respectfully

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and the purpose of the templates is it's showing you how to integrate your ideas with the professors post

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and the two students post because that's how you're going to get

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that high score because

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that shows high what I call synthesis argument evaluation assessment you're showing a lot of high critical thinking reasoning

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when you follow these kinds of templates

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when you're integrating ideas like this okay how about number four here example driven approach template it.

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I believe your position.

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mainly due to its real -world impact.

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The professor's post emphasizes key issue, which is especially important in academic settings.

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For example, realistic scenario demonstrates how this affects students directly.

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Student A's post reinforces this by mentioning student A's support.

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In contrast, students B's concern about,

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student B's point, is understandable but less convincing as a result than conclusion that would be example driven approach

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template number five how about

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if you want to compare student views maybe that's something you'd like to do

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and you want to practice this remember that these are example templates

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and you should practice them and get more familiar with them

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so then when you're taking the TOEFL and you get to the academic online writing discussion, you'll kind of know intuitively which of the templates is going to work better,

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given the purpose of the discussion post you're trying to do, if that makes sense.

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So in your opinion, then your stance is the most reasonable position.

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Student A argues that, student A's view, which highlights an important benefit.

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Student B, however, claims, student B's view, focusing on potential drawbacks.

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Well, both perspectives are valid, key difference you emphasize, makes one argument stronger.

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For example, supporting example supports a conclusion.

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Overall, then state the final judgment.

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How about the next one?

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You have a problem -solution structure to it.

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And it'll look something like this.

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I believe your position, because it addresses a common problem discussed by the professor.

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Many students face problem which affects their academic or personal success.

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For example, give a clear example illustrates this issue.

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Student A recognizes this challenge by stating, student A's idea.

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While student B is concerned about student B's issue, a possible solution is, solution, for these reasons, final position.

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so the next one it's a cautious academic tone

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so what would this sound like if you want to do this one cautious means

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that you don't want to come on as being too strong

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you have some doubts maybe i tend to support your position

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although some limitations should be considered the professor's post suggests

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that key idea which is generally reasonable for example evidence

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or scenario supports his claim student A agrees with this interpretation

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noting student A's point student B's concern about student B's concern is valid

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but it does not outweigh the benefits therefore measure conclusion.

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The next one, this is what we call a cause and effect focus.

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I believe your stance because it leads to positive outcomes for students.

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One major reason is that cause which results in effect.

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This can be seen when, example, student A supports this by emphasizing student A's idea.

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Although student B raises concerns about student B's issue, these effects are less significant.

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Overall, final conclusion, and here is a template where you want to show a very strong argument.

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I strongly believe your position because it directly addresses the issue raised by their professor.

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The main reason is clear reason, which affects all students regardless of background.

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For example, specific realistic example demonstrates this clearly.

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Student A's post supports this view by explaining student A support.

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While student B disagrees, your rebuttal, but remember, be respectful, but you can definitely rebut,

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shows why this concern is limited for these reasons, clear, confident wrap up.

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So these are good ones.

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These are strong templates to help you.

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Now let's move on to the next part.

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Let's get into what we call different kinds of reporting verbs.

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Reporting verbs are important because you're explaining information which comes from either the professor's post or prompt or the student's post.

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So there's different verbs that will do different kinds of things.

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And notice how all the verbs I'm going to show you.

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I'm going to keep them in the simple present using the third person present singular inflection S.

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So if you don't want to judge or make any argument, you want to be neutral.

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You can use things like states, describes, explains, notes, reports, outlines, present, summarizes, identifies and observes.

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Right.

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You're making no judgment.

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You're just kind of explaining the information.

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now what if you want to show agreement or support

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so here are reporting verbs

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that show alignment with something maybe you agree with the student student b maybe

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or student a or so you'll use words like agree supports confirms endorses of firms reinforces validates concurs upholds and then backs.

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These are all verbs.

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So use these as you're practicing this type of writing task.

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Remember that reporting verbs help your writing sound academic and not conversation.

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So it gives you the right formal tone you're looking for.

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Now how about disagreement or critique?

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So use Use these verbs to show opposition or criticism, disagrees, challenges, disputes, criticizes, questions,

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refutes, rejects, encounters, opposes, or contradicts.

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How about argument and claim making?

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So when you want to take a position, use these reporting verbs argues,

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claims, contends, asserts, maintains, insists, proposes, suggests, posits, and advances.

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And the key is to use a variety of these reporting verbs.

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Don't just pick two and then use them the entire time.

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Maybe you'll take five or six.

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Five or six good, strong reporting verbs, I think, during your discussion posts,

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I think would really showcase your wide range of kind of vocabulary

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and it will give you the right formal tone you're looking for.

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Emphasis and strengthening ideas.

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So if you want to show the importance or you want to show the intensity of something, you can use these verbs.

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Emphasizes, highlights stresses underscores prioritizes foregrounds draws attention to focuses on accentuates spotlights

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and remember that reporting verbs they help the writing sound academic not conversational you don't want to feel like

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when you go to church right if you're going to church on Saturday or Sunday and you go to church in shorts,

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sliders, a t -shirt and a Budweiser cap, you're not fitting in.

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That's not what a lot of people look like when they go to church.

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You're going to be more dressed than that.

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How about this?

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Conversely, if you go to the beach, right, you don't want to go to the beach wearing a suit and a tie, a white shirt, a tie,

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you know, black shoes, dark socks, whatever, that's not going to be the right dress for the right occasion.

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So I'm telling you that these reporting verbs and

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that everything I've been showing you in this video is going

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to give you the right tone for this type of writing task so you can score high.

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Cause -effect explanation.

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So when you want to share relationships or reasoning, you can use things like explains,

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demonstrates, illustrates, shows, reveals, indicates, links, associates, attributes, accounts for.

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Those are strong verbs in those cases.

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Comparison and contrast.

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So if your purpose is to show similarities or differences between your ideas

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and one of the discussion polls from either the students or the professor, you can use these types of reporting verbs.

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Compares, contrasts, distinguishes, differentiates, parallels,

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aligns, diverges, separates, equates, or sets apart.

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Those are all strong verbs there.

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evaluation and assessment so here are some good reporting verbs

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if you want to judge value effectiveness or quality Here are some very strong verbs,

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evaluates, assesses, examines, analyzes, appraises, reviews, critiques, judges, measures, or ways.

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Those would be strong verbs for evaluation or assessment.

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Now, if you want to show limitation or caution, so these are reporting verbs that help you to show restrictions, uncertainty, or balance.

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acknowledges concedes, qualifies limits, cautions warns,

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moderates tempers contextualizes narrows so these are helpful in these cases show limitation or caution

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how about conclusion or synthesis So use these reporting verbs when you're going to wrap up or you want to integrate ideas.

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Concludes, determines, infers, synthesizes, integrates,

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summarizes, consolidates, revolves, generalizes, draws a conclusion that.

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So these are all important to help you with this purpose.

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Okay, so finally, if you've gotten to the end of this video, I apologize for it being so academic, but this is who I am.

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I'm a professor of linguistics and composition at California State University, San Bernardino.

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I'm helping you not just score high on the TOEFL exam,

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but I'm trying to equip you with the skills you need to communicate professionally and academically.

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And those types of environments and this video you follow what I've been teaching you so far will help you.

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So the final reminders here when you're doing this academic discussion writing task, take a clear position.

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Don't try to stay in the middle.

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Add something new.

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By all means, you must contribute.

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You cannot just re -explain what everybody has already said.

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Use examples.

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Remember, if you're thinking about concrete versus abstract details, use the concrete type examples.

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They're very effective in supporting your argument.

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Don't forget, engage with classmates.

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Keep it academic.

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Very, very important.

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So here's my final video here.

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I like this quote by Bruce Lee, and that's why I put it here says I fear not the man who has practiced 10 ,000 kicks once

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but I fear the man who has practiced one kick 10 ,000 times how about

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that think about that for a minute so think about the sentences

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and the templates and everything I've given you

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so far in the video what if you take some of what I'm teaching you

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and you practice it over and over and over and over what do you think is going to happen, right?

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You're going to improve your grammar skills.

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You're going to improve your syntactic variety type skills.

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You're going to improve your reasoning, critical thinking.

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You're going to improve a lot of really, really good writing type proficiency.

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I'm telling you.

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Now in the next video, I know I've given you some practice with, I gave you some mini tests and some practice tests here, but I know, and you know, that's not going to be enough.

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You remember what Bruce Lee said?

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I fear the man who has practiced one kick 10 ,000 times.

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So in the next video in this playlist, I'm going to give you a test bank.

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I'm going to try to get close to 100 questions there so you can practice this at least 100 times.

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Maybe not 10 ,000 times, but you're going to do it 100 times.

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That'd be great, right?

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remember that you can get personalized feedback

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if you follow me my youtube channel you'll notice

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that i don't post all my feedback online

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but sometimes students give me permission

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and i post the feedback i'm giving them either speaking

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or writing feedback i'll post it to my youtube channel

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so you know the kind of feedback i give my students

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so if you want that kind of personalized TOEFL speaking and writing feedback, you can visit my website at bettertoeflscores .com.

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It has the same name as my YouTube channel.

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And I'm telling you, I give a lot of feedback, especially with accent reduction.

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A lot of students need a lot of help with their speaking.

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So I do have speaking and writing feedback.

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And the way that works, is, um, it's, it's a $99 a month fee.

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It's not free.

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Believe me, it, it, it takes me a lot of time to give feedback

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and students send me daily speaking and daily writing practice.

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So if you send me like a, you can basically send me one writing practice test per day, or you can send me 60 seconds of speaking or pronunciation practice per day.

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But think about that.

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If that's 60 seconds per day over a month.

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I mean, that's a lot.

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That's a lot of feedback you're getting for only $99.

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Remember that if you, if you try to meet with me face to face by zoom, I charge minimum $50 an hour, 50 for one hour.

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Uh, anyway, thank you for watching the video.

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Don't forget, subscribe to my YouTube channel.

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You'll be notified when I have more videos coming out

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and i hope that you've enjoyed this particular video and remember

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that this is part of a youtube playlist so

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if you look below this video i'll have a pinned comment sending you to the next video in this series

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이 레슨의 어휘와 말하기 포인트

이 C1 수준 말하기 레슨은 영상 “TOEFL Writing 2026: Academic Discussion Masterclass”을(를) 바탕으로 합니다. 가장 자주 반복되는 단어는 다음과 같습니다: student, example, position, academic, professor. 이 영상에는 섀도잉할 문장 632개와 단어 7103개가 있습니다. 말하는 구간의 길이는 55:19입니다. 화자는 분당 약 128단어의 일정한 속도로 말해서 섀도잉하기에 편한 속도입니다. 영어에서 가장 많이 쓰이는 3,000단어에 속하는 단어가 81%뿐이라 어휘가 어려운 편입니다.

이 영상의 핵심 어휘

영상에서 가장 어려운 단어 15개를 발음, 뜻과 함께 정리했습니다.

단어	발음	뜻
verb 명사	/vɝb/	동사
template 명사	/ˈtɛm.plɪt/	템플렛, 샘플
emphasize 동사	/ˈɛm.fə.saɪz/	강조(强調)하다
literacy 명사	/ˈlɪtəɹəsi/	문해
prompt 동사	/pɹɑmpt/	부추기다
flexibility 명사	/ˌflɛksɪˈbɪlɪti/	유연성
classmate 명사	/ˈklæs.meɪt/	동급생, 급우
teamwork 명사		팀워크
synthesis 명사	/ˈsɪnθəsɪs/	통합, 종합
appetizer 명사	/ˈæpɪˌtaɪzə/	전채, 애피타이저
dessert 명사	/dɪˈzɝt/	후식, 디저트
drawback 명사	/ˈdɹɔˌbæk/	결점
parrot 명사	/ˈpæɹət/	앵무새
repetition 명사	/ˌɹɛp.əˈtɪʃ.ən/	되풀이, 반복
summarize 동사	/ˈsʌməˌɹaɪz/	요약하다

영상에 나오는 구동사

단어	발음	뜻
point out 동사		가리키다
wrap up 동사		시마이치다
come out 동사	/ˌkʌm ˈaʊt/	나오다

따라 말해 볼 만한 문장

영상에 나오는 짧고 완결된 문장으로, 일상 대화에서 그대로 쓸 수 있습니다:

That's going to get you a super high score.
How do you do that?
You see how it works?
How does your writing compare to this one?
Did you guys see that right there?

이 영상의 문법

화자가 가장 많이 쓰는 문형을 영상 속 실제 표현과 함께 정리했습니다.

문형	영상 속 표현
현재완료진행 have/has been + -ing — 전에 시작해 지금도 계속되는 동작	I've been showing · I've been teaching
조건문 if + 절, will/would + 동사 — 조건과 그 결과	if you look below this video i'll have
현재완료 have/has + 과거분사 — 과거의 일이 지금도 관련이 있을 때	has already said · have we done · have advanced
수동태 be + 과거분사 — 누가 하는지보다 무슨 일이 일어나는지에 초점	is supported · are trusted · can be seen

주의할 발음

화자는 I'm, you're, don't 같은 축약형과 약화된 형태를 113번 사용합니다. 들리는 대로 짧게 발음하세요.

“sh”와 “zh” 소리: limitation /lɪmɪˈteɪʃən/, repetition /ˌɹɛp.əˈtɪʃ.ən/, cautious /ˈkɔːʃəs/, caution /ˈkɔːʃ(ə)n/, graduation /ˌɡɹæd͡ʒuˈeɪʃən/
긴 단어 — 강세 위치에 주의: literacy /ˈlɪtəɹəsi/, limitation /lɪmɪˈteɪʃən/, flexibility /ˌflɛksɪˈbɪlɪti/, personalize /ˈpɜː.sə.nə.laɪz/, appetizer /ˈæpɪˌtaɪzə/

한국어 화자가 어려워하는 소리:

/f/ — ㅍ(/p/)으로 바꾸지 말고 윗니를 아랫입술에 대기: emphasize /ˈɛm.fə.saɪz/, flexibility /ˌflɛksɪˈbɪlɪti/, clarify /ˈklæɹ.ɪ.faɪ/, refute /ɹɪˈfjuːt/, respectfully /ɹɪˈspɛkt.fə.li/
/v/ — ㅂ(/b/)과 구별하기: verb /vɝb/, overlook /ˈoʊ.vɚˌlʊk/, vocabulary /vəˈkæb.jə.lə.ɹi/, vague /veɪɡ/
/z/ — ㅈ이 아니라 성대를 울리는 /s/: emphasize /ˈɛm.fə.saɪz/, personalize /ˈpɜː.sə.nə.laɪz/, appetizer /ˈæpɪˌtaɪzə/, dessert /dɪˈzɝt/, summarize /ˈsʌməˌɹaɪz/

이 영상으로 연습하는 방법

먼저 말하지 않고 영상을 끝까지 듣고 모르는 단어를 적어 둡니다.
보통 속도로 한 문장씩 섀도잉하고, 화자의 리듬과 맞을 때까지 반복합니다.
자신의 목소리를 녹음해 원본과 비교하고, verb, template, emphasize 같은 단어에 특히 주의합니다.

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