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So why are we asking you to write an essay as part of your application to VIN Uni?
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We're trying to get a little bit more insight into you as a person, specifically in four attributes, ability, aspiration, creativity, and commitment.
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This essay will focus on aspiration and commitment.
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We want to know your aspirations and your commitments as a person.
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So how can you be successful in this essay.
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The first thing is make sure you answer the question.
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We want to hear your personal story
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and we want you to describe a real event from the past in which you've really persevered and tried hard to achieve.
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The second part is to describe an aspiration for the future
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and we want you to describe something which is really meaningful that you really want to achieve sometime in the future.
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The important thing is to describe and show show us that you have some characteristics.
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Show us that you have drive.
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Show us that you have initiative.
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Show us that you have perseverance.
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And show us that you want to dream big and achieve something in the future.
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How do you get started with this essay?
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My first advice is read the question really carefully.
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Read it 10 times to make sure that you understand what is this question asking you to do.
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Second, I'd recommend to make a list or a mind map of all of the different ideas you have for this topic.
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After that, give it to a friend or a teacher and and get some feedback on your ideas.
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Are they relevant?
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Do they work in this particular essay?
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And number four, after you finish writing, make sure you get lots of different feedback from different people and revise your essay so it's the best it can be.
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So how do you organize this particular essay?
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It's actually a very simple organization.
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Probably we'll start with the introduction.
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And in introduction, you're going to set up exactly how are you going to organize your two main parts.
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And the two main parts are commitment and aspiration.
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After you talk about those in the body paragraphs, the conclusion would do a nice simple summary of what was your main commitment
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and what is your main aspiration for the future.
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So you can see it's a very simple structure, just two main body paragraphs, one for each of the two questions.
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Here are some tips for success in this essay.
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First of all, get personal.
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This essay is for the panel to get to know you as a person.
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So make sure it's about you and it's personal, not about something somebody else did, not about something in theory you would like to do, about you personally.
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Number two, be truthful.
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We want to know what you actually did in the past and what you actually want to do in the future.
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So please don't make things up, don't embellish the truth, make it truthful.
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Number three, not too formal.
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This isn't a super formal essay.
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It's a very personal essay.
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So you don't have to worry about being academic, being too formal.
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We just want to know about you as a person.
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Number four, don't just describe the what, but also the why.
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If you only describe your ambition for the future, it's not enough.
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We want to know why do you want to achieve this goal in the future.
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So don't just describe the what, but also the why.
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First, one tip is that because a very short book is a very short book, we can only read the best information for the book.
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So we need to read from 1 to 3 books for the book, and we need to read the book for the book.
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So that the book is not to be a long book.
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And the tip is that because we read the book is often a good source of the
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we write a book for a book that is just like the book
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that I sent you then it doesn't need to be needed
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so we need to write a book that is a story to tell you about the story
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I have two words to you
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first is that you don't need to use the words that are so very important And more importantly, we need to focus on how to explain the story to people read the story.
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And second, you don't need to become anyone else.
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Because if you are in your own business, then you will see the ability of your business.
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With me, to do a good business, first we need to connect the topic of the business with the practicality.
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From there we can bring out the ideas and the creative ideas.
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After finishing the writing, Please remember to write the words, the words and the words of the text so that you can be perfect and better.
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And if you can send the teacher, friends, friends to see.
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The second question is very useful for you.
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为何这个视频是绝佳的英语口语练习素材？
视频中招生官的表达清晰自然，语速适中，内容围绕“ essay 写作技巧”展开，话题贴近学习生活，非常适合用来练习影子跟读法（shadow speak）。其口语化的用词和逻辑清晰的结构，能帮助学习者在模仿中掌握实用的表达和叙事节奏，同时还能积累留学申请相关的词汇，一举多得。
拆解自然表达，学习地道口语
我们来看看视频里的几个句子，为何它们听起来自然又实用：
- “Read it 10 times to make sure that you understand what is this question asking you to do.” 这里用“10 times”而非“many times”，更具体且口语化，符合日常交流习惯。模仿时注意“make sure that”的连读和语调。
- “Show us that you have drive. Show us that you have initiative.” 重复“Show us that”形成排比，增强表达力度。“drive”和“initiative”都是精准的书面用词，但用在口语中并不突兀，体现了正式与口语的平衡。
- “This isn't a super formal essay. It's a very personal essay.” 用“super”代替“very”，更具口语化特征，让表达更亲切。“isn't... It's...”的对比结构，简洁明了，适合模仿其节奏。
影子跟读法练习步骤，轻松提升口语
利用这个视频进行shadowing练习，可遵循以下简单流程：
- 先完整观看视频，熟悉内容和语调。
- 逐句播放，每句暂停后立即跟读，模仿发音、语速和重音。重点练习“get personal”“be truthful”等短语的连读。
- 用录音设备记录自己的跟读，对比原视频，找出语调、停顿的差异，反复修正。
- 尝试脱稿复述，用自己的话总结视频中的写作技巧，检验理解和表达能力。
坚持使用影子跟读法（shadowspeak），结合合适的shadowing site资源，你的英语口语会在不知不觉中变得更流利自然。记住，练习贵在坚持，每天10分钟，效果看得见！
视频中的语法
说话人最常用的结构，并附上视频中的原话：
| 结构 | 视频中的用法 |
|---|---|
| 被动语态 be + 过去分词 — 强调发生了什么，而不是谁做的 | is read · be needed |
| 最高级 the -est / the most … — 一组中最高或最低的 | the best |
| 义务：must / have to / need to 表示某事是必要的 | have to worry · need to read · need to be |
| “will” 表将来 will + 动词 — 决定、承诺或预测 | will focus · we'll start · will see |
什么是跟读法？
跟读法 (Shadowing) 是一种有科学依据的语言学习技巧，最初开发用于专业口译员的培训，并由多语言者Alexander Arguelles博士普及。这个方法简单而强大：您在听英语母语原声的同时立即大声重复——就像是一个延迟1-2秒紧跟说话者的影子。与被动听力或语法练习不同，跟读法强迫您的大脑和口腔肌肉同时处理并模仿真实的讲话模式。研究表明它能显着提高发音准确性，语调，节奏，连读，听力理解和口语流利度——使其成为雅思口语备考和真实英语交流最有效的方法之一。