์‰๋„์ž‰ ์—ฐ์Šต: ๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง Think Feeding Wildlife is Harmless Think Again!. Model Answer B2/C1 - ์˜์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ธฐ

์—ฐ์Šต ๋ชจ๋“œ ์„ ํƒ

๊ฐ ๋ชจ๋“œ๋Š” ์ „์ฒด ํ™”๋ฉด ์—ฐ์Šต์‹ค๋กœ ์—ด๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

13 ๋ฌธ์žฅ
๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์งง๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ธธ๋ฉด Edit๋ฅผ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ ์กฐ์ •ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
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People often feed or encourage wild animals in their gardens, thinking it's harmless or even helpful.
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But this behavior can lead to serious consequences.
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Wild animals lose their natural fear of humans, start depending on artificial food sources, and may become aggressive or territorial.
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This not only puts the animals at risk, it also endangers pets, small children, and even local biodiversity.
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Habituated wildlife can cause property damage, carry disease, and disrupt ecosystems by displacing native species.
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In many regions, there are already laws against feeding wildlife, especially larger species like foxes, raccoons, or deer.
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But these rules are rarely enforced.
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I believe people should face fines if they actively attract or feed wild animals on purpose.
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This isn't about punishing kindness.
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It's about protecting the natural balance.
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Wild animals should stay wild.
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Encouraging them to rely on humans does more harm than good.
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We need to take this seriously, not just for safety, but for conservation.

์•ฑ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ

์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ

AI ๋ฐœ์Œ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋ฌธ์žฅ๋งˆ๋‹ค ์ ์ˆ˜ ํ™•์ธ
IPA ๋ฐœ์Œ ์—ฐ์Šต๋ชจ๋“  ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐ
๋‹จ์–ด ํ•™์Šต๋‚˜๋งŒ์˜ ๋‹จ์–ด์žฅ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ
๋‹จ์–ด ๊ฒŒ์ž„๋†€๋ฉด์„œ ์™ธ์šฐ๊ธฐ

์ด ๋ ˆ์Šจ์˜ ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ํฌ์ธํŠธ

์ด ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ ˆ์Šจ์€ ์˜์ƒ โ€œ๐Ÿ‡ฌ๐Ÿ‡ง Think Feeding Wildlife is Harmless Think Again!. Model Answer B2/C1โ€์„(๋ฅผ) ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์˜์ƒ์—๋Š” ์„€๋„์ž‰ํ•  ๋ฌธ์žฅ 13๊ฐœ์™€ ๋‹จ์–ด 157๊ฐœ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ธธ์ด๋Š” 1:16์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ™”์ž๋Š” ๋ถ„๋‹น ์•ฝ 124๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ์ผ์ •ํ•œ ์†๋„๋กœ ๋งํ•ด์„œ ์„€๋„์ž‰ํ•˜๊ธฐ์— ํŽธํ•œ ์†๋„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋งŽ์ด ์“ฐ์ด๋Š” 3,000๋‹จ์–ด์— ์†ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ 78%๋ฟ์ด๋ผ ์–ดํœ˜๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ํŽธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด ์˜์ƒ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜

์˜์ƒ์— ๋‚˜์˜ค๋Š” ์ตํ˜€ ๋‘˜ ๋งŒํ•œ ๋‹จ์–ด 15๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ์Œ, ๋œป๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ •๋ฆฌํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋‹จ์–ด๋ฐœ์Œ๋œป
encourage ๋™์‚ฌ/ษชnหˆkสŒษน.ษชdอกส’/๊ฒฉ๋ คํ•˜๋‹ค
harm ๋ช…์‚ฌ/hษ‘หm/ํ•ด
pet ๋ช…์‚ฌ/pษ›t/์• ์™„๋™๋ฌผ, ๋ฐ˜๋ ค๋™๋ฌผ
conservation ๋ช…์‚ฌ/หŒkษ‘nsษ™(ษน)หˆveษชสƒษ™n/๋ณด์กด
aggressive ํ˜•์šฉ์‚ฌ/ษ™หˆษกษนษ›s.ษชv/๊ณต๊ฒฉ์ ์ธ, ์นจ๋žต์ ์ธ
rely ๋™์‚ฌ/ษนษชหˆlaษช/์˜์ง€(ไพๆ”ฏ)ํ•˜๋‹ค
artificial ํ˜•์šฉ์‚ฌ/หŒษ‘ห.tษชหˆfษชสƒ.ษ™l/์ธ๊ณต, ์ธ์กฐ
attract ๋™์‚ฌ/ษ™หˆtษนรฆkt/๋Œ๋‹ค, ๋Œ์–ด๋“ค์ด๋‹ค
depend ๋™์‚ฌ/dษชหˆpษ›nd/์˜์กดํ•˜๋‹ค, ...์— ๋‹ฌ๋ ค ์žˆ๋‹ค
deer ๋ช…์‚ฌ/dษชษน/์‚ฌ์Šด
consequence ๋ช…์‚ฌ/หˆkษ‘n.sษช.kwษ™ns/๊ฒฐ๊ณผ
kindness ๋ช…์‚ฌ/หˆkaษชnd.nษ™s/์นœ์ ˆ
punish ๋™์‚ฌ/หˆpสŒnษชสƒ/๋ฒŒ์ฃผ๋‹ค, ์ง•๋ฒŒํ•˜๋‹ค
territorial ํ˜•์šฉ์‚ฌ/หŒtษ›ษน.ษ™หˆtษ”ษน.i.ษ™l/์˜ํ† , ๋ นํ† 
harmless ํ˜•์šฉ์‚ฌ/หˆhษ‘ษนmlษ™s/๋ฌดํ•ด์˜

์ฃผ์˜ํ•  ๋ฐœ์Œ

  • โ€œshโ€์™€ โ€œzhโ€ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ: conservation /หŒkษ‘nsษ™(ษน)หˆveษชสƒษ™n/, artificial /หŒษ‘ห.tษชหˆfษชสƒ.ษ™l/, punish /หˆpสŒnษชสƒ/
  • ๊ธด ๋‹จ์–ด โ€” ๊ฐ•์„ธ ์œ„์น˜์— ์ฃผ์˜: conservation /หŒkษ‘nsษ™(ษน)หˆveษชสƒษ™n/, artificial /หŒษ‘ห.tษชหˆfษชสƒ.ษ™l/, territorial /หŒtษ›ษน.ษ™หˆtษ”ษน.i.ษ™l/, ecosystem /หˆikoสŠหŒsษชstษ™m/, biodiversity /หŒbaษชoสŠdษ™หˆvษšsษ™ti/

ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋ ค์›Œํ•˜๋Š” ์†Œ๋ฆฌ:

  • /f/ โ€” ใ…(/p/)์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐ”๊พธ์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ  ์œ—๋‹ˆ๋ฅผ ์•„๋žซ์ž…์ˆ ์— ๋Œ€๊ธฐ: wildlife /หˆwaษชldlaษชf/, helpful /หˆhษ›lp.flฬฉ/, artificial /หŒษ‘ห.tษชหˆfษชสƒ.ษ™l/, enforce /ษชnหˆfoษนs/
  • /v/ โ€” ใ…‚(/b/)๊ณผ ๊ตฌ๋ณ„ํ•˜๊ธฐ: conservation /หŒkษ‘nsษ™(ษน)หˆveษชสƒษ™n/, aggressive /ษ™หˆษกษนษ›s.ษชv/, actively /หˆรฆktษชvli/, biodiversity /หŒbaษชoสŠdษ™หˆvษšsษ™ti/
  • /r/๊ณผ /l/ ๊ตฌ๋ณ„ํ•˜๊ธฐ: rarely /หˆษนษ›ษ™ษนli/, rely /ษนษชหˆlaษช/, territorial /หŒtษ›ษน.ษ™หˆtษ”ษน.i.ษ™l/, harmless /หˆhษ‘ษนmlษ™s/

์ด ์˜์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

  1. ๋จผ์ € ๋งํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ์˜์ƒ์„ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ ์–ด ๋‘ก๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  2. ๋ณดํ†ต ์†๋„๋กœ ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์”ฉ ์„€๋„์ž‰ํ•˜๊ณ , ํ™”์ž์˜ ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ๊ณผ ๋งž์„ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  3. ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋ชฉ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋…น์Œํ•ด ์›๋ณธ๊ณผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๊ณ , encourage, harm, pet ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด์— ํŠนํžˆ ์ฃผ์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์„€๋„์ž‰ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•: ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ณ„ ์ „์ฒด ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ ์ฝ๊ธฐ โ†’