Shadowing Practice: IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 - Bar Charts Lesson 2 - Learn English Speaking with Video

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Hello, thank you for joining me today for this IELTS academic writing preparation lesson.
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Today we are talking all about task one bar charts, but the types of bar charts that function as line graphs.
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This is quite tricky because it is a task that will be presented to you as a bar chart,
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but you'll have to know that the strategy is actually very similar to that of a line graph.
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So think of this as a line graph disguised as a bar chart, and this will, of course, affect our strategy.
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So today I'm going to take you through a general guide
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that you can use for these types of writing prompts
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when it comes to the Academic IELTS Task 1 in the Writing section.
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And then, of course, we'll go through a couple of step-by-step examples so that you can see our strategy put in use.
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So without further ado, let's get started.
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Now, I just want to call your attention to the three types of bar charts
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that you are likely to see on the academic version of the IELTS, specifically for the writing section task one.
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We're going to look at number two, the second type in our video today, but just be aware that these three exist.
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The first one is a bar chart with categories on the x-axis.
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So this is a classic bar chart with various categories, different things that you see along the x-axis.
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The second type is what we're going to be looking at today.
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This is a bar chart with dates or years on the x-axis, and so it functions as a line graph.
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And the third type is two bar charts together, and that will require a strategy that looks at both of these bar charts.
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Again, today we are going to focus on a number two.
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In general, you can use more or less the same guide for all three of these, but note that the language
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and a little bit of the strategy will change just a bit when looking at these three different types.
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So the general guide that you can be expected to use looks like this.
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You've got two steps.
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The first step is to analyze the chart and plan how to group the information.
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This is very important because you don't want to just start writing your essay.
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You want to actually analyze the chart, pick it apart a little bit, like I'll show you today, and know what to write about.
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And then step two, very simply, is to write an essay using the recommended essay structure.
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This is also something else that you should keep in mind.
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You never want to write blindly without any paragraph structure or without different groups because this will affect your score.
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So you want to use the recommended essay structure that I'll show you in just a bit.
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For now, let's look at step one, and there are different parts to step one to keep in mind.
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This is basically what we're going to do on a very general level, but if we really look at the detail of step one, we're going to do two things.
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First, we're going to organize the information that we see in our writing prompt and in our bar chart into groups.
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Now, they're most likely going to be two groups, but keep in mind that you may have different groups.
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And basically you're just going to organize what you see, the information in your bar chart, into these two groups.
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And then you're going to find information that stands out, something that is perhaps surprising, like a huge decrease or a sharp increase.
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Remember these function as line graphs.
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So I'll show you how that will play into this.
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So these are the first two things to do in step one.
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And then you want to figure out the overall trend.
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This is very important because we can't just look at detail when it comes to this.
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We have to understand the overall trend.
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And so there are two ways to do this as well.
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Like I said, we want to analyze the chart as a line graph.
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This really makes it easy.
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I'll show you in our example, but don't just think in terms of bars, but think in terms of lines.
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And this will help you understand general trends, sharp decreases, sharp increases, and the like.
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And then, of course, with this, we're going to understand the general trend, like I just said, and understand whether or not there's an increase or there's a decline.
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And we can actually look at great language also to use in order to describe this.
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Okay, so that is the first thing we're going to do.
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This is all part of step one.
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This is the preparation work
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and the outline work in order to really dissect the writing prompt and the bar chart that we have.
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With that being said, let's go ahead and look at our writing prompt today, and then we'll get started with this example.
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Okay, and here is our example for today.
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We have our writing prompt,
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which says, the bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.
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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Write at least 150 words.
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All right, so of course we know that our minimum is 150 words, and we see here that we basically do have two groups.
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So we have Mango Company and Jack and Jones Company, and we have months on the x-axis.
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So this works as our dates.
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We have months here and these are next year.
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So this is also a great clue that we'll have to be speaking in the future tense because this is not present, not past, but it is estimated sales in the future.
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Then on the y-axis, we have the thousands of pairs.
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So that will also help us when looking at what we are examining today.
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So notice how we have bars here.
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technically these are bars and this is a bar chart, but it's really best to look at this as a line graph.
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So let me show you what I mean.
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Let's look at step one.
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And remember step one is analyzing the chart and planning out how to group the information. And
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so the first thing you should be doing in step one
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is really analyzing the chart as though it were a line graph.
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And so all you really have to do is just draw a line for Jack and Jones and also for Mango.
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Draw a line and this will give you a better idea as to the increase,
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the decrease, and really how you can compare and understand these two companies and the estimated sales.
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So note that Jack and Jones is shown here in blue and it starts out higher than Mango, but then it drops.
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And then after that you see a steady increase, and then it increases all the way.
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Mango, on the other hand, starts off much lower, but then makes a steady increase.
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So this shows you the two groups that we talked about in step one.
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And so now I'm going to organize the information on the right-hand side here into two groups.
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So I got my first grouping, which is going to be my first paragraph in the body, and the second grouping, which is going to be the second paragraph in the body.
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I'll show you the outline in just a bit, But just know for now that mango is going to be my first grouping,
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which is the orange, and Jack and Jones will be my second grouping, which is the blue.
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I'm just going to make a couple of notes here, things that really stand out to us.
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Remember, that's the second part of what we're going to do here.
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And for mango, really something that stands out to me is that you see an increase from January to August.
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Now this is not a sudden increase, but it's quite subtle, but I'm still going to put January to August just to give me an idea Increase
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and remember your outline does not have to be perfect.
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No one is going to see it This is just for you to base your writing off of
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so that's the first thing I'm going to write about mango Then I am going to talk about this plateau
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that you see here So from August September October November, there's quite a plateau So then I'm going to say plateau.
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I'll abbreviate it there.
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And then I'll talk about how after that, there's going to be a rise to December.
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Okay.
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Now I will talk about numbers later as I'm actually writing out the essay, but this is basically what I'm going to say about mango.
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I'm going to do the same thing for Jack and Jones.
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And basically what I see here that is quite clear to me
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when I make comparisons is that Jack and Jones is going to outsell Mango at the beginning and also at the end.
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Note how I don't talk about the middle
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because it looks like Mango is actually going to outsell Jack and Jones in the middle, but in the beginning and the end,
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it's quite clear that they are going to outsell Mango.
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I'll put here beginning and end.
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This is just for me to understand.
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And then I am going to talk about how sales dip.
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So this is a great way to say that sales will decline, dip a little bit, but then come back up right around February.
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You see how it dips and then it comes back up.
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So I'm going to say sales dip.
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I'll talk about February and then see how this is sort of like a stagnant, slight increase, but it's also just stagnant.
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So I'm going to say something about how sales stagnate until August.
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So I'll say sales dip, then sales stagnates, and then I'll talk about August.
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And then I'll just talk about the increase that we'll see for the rest of the year,
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specifically with September, October, and then we'll talk about the end of the year.
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So these are my two groups here with Mango, Jack and Jones.
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I have included some details that I'm going to include in the essay.
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This just gives me a good idea of what I'm going to write, and it really prepares me for writing with a clear view
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and really just making sure that I touch on all the points.
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Now, remember the second part of step one
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and the last part we're going to do before we actually write our essay is analyzing the chart as a line graph, which is what we have done for our first section,
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and then understand the general trends.
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We don't really need details here.
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We just have to understand if there is an increase or a decline.
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And basically you see
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that there is a prediction of an upward trend in sales of jeans for both Mango and Jack and Jones.
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And it just looks like the customers in Turkey are expected to purchase more jeans from Jack and Jones.
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So we can say that there is an overall upward trend,
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but we do want to make a note that more jeans will be purchased from Jack and Jones.
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So this is something that we can talk about briefly in our overview paragraph.
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We've basically done all of step one.
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So we have analyzed the chart, grouped everything.
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We've understood the trend.
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And now the last thing to do is just look at our outline, which is going to be looking at step two and writing the essay.
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I'm going to briefly show you the outline that we're going to follow, and then we are going to start writing our essay based on this information.
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Okay, and just to remind you, we have step two, writing an essay using the recommended essay structure, and that structure is as follows.
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So we are going to organize our paragraphs.
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Now, we have first, obviously, the introduction, then an overview paragraph, body paragraph one, and body paragraph two.
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Now, to go into detail here, the introduction is going to paraphrase the task question.
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This is pretty much just a sentence, perhaps two sentences maximum.
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Then the overview is going to be about the overall trend or a general overview of the main groupings.
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This is the last part of step one.
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It is what we just did in our writing example, looking at the overview, the general increases.
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And then the last two paragraphs are going to be about our two groups.
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So we're going to write about the first grouping of lines with similar trends and values in body paragraph one.
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And then of course, in body paragraph two, we are going to write about the second grouping of lines with similar trends and values.
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And this is it.
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This is a foolproof outline that will guarantee that you're writing all of the necessary information.
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You're introducing it professionally and also analytically.
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You are looking at trends and then you are going into detail with your two groups.
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So using this, let's start writing.
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Okay, so I've made things just a bit neater.
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I've replaced the original picture of the bar chart with the line graph version just so that it's easier to follow along.
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And our notes are right here on the lower left-hand side.
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We've got our groupings and we've got our overall trend.
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I'm going to write here on the right-hand side.
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And of course, when you are doing your own practice or the actual exam, you do not want to write these headings.
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So I'm just using this so that you can follow along and see the introduction, the overview, and the different paragraphs.
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At the end of writing everything, I will talk about some key language, and we'll look at the word count and everything else together.
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For now, I'm just going to write it as though I would write the essay based on the notes.
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So first thing first, we have our introduction, which is basically just going to be a different version of the writing prompt.
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I'm going to paraphrase it and write the task question and just provide a nice introduction.
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So I'm going to say
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that the bar chart illustrates the predicted sales in Turkey of denim jeans for Mango and Jack and Jones companies.
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Transactions are measured in thousands of pairs.
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This is very important because I need to know exactly what I'm talking about.
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So this is thousands of pairs.
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Note that this would not be 1,000.
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It would be 100,000.
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So keep that in mind.
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Basically, I've just said exactly what the writing prompt says.
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It's talking about the predicted sales.
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So I know I'm talking in the future.
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We're talking about Turkey, the mango and Jack and Jones.
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And keep in mind that I have this ampersand only because it is in the label.
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I usually would not use symbols or any sort of abbreviations in the exam, but in this case it's fine because it is the title of the company.
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Okay, now for our overview paragraph, we're going to use this information down here, which is talking about the overall trend.
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And so just to start off, I'm going to use this great word, overall, basically, and it says overall,
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the chart predicts an upward trend in sales of jeans.
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Remember, this is what we looked at.
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Furthermore, Turkish customers are predicted to purchase more jeans from Jack and Jones Company.
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And this is what we looked at in the end of step one.
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So overall upward trend, which is what I've said, and of course, more jeans for Jack and Jones.
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That is sufficient for our overview.
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Now with body paragraph one, we're talking all about mango.
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So this is our first grouping.
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So when I start talking about mango, I'm going to say regarding mango, and we'll talk about January and August.
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So I'll say between January and August, Mango sales will increase by,
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now I want to understand how much it's going to increase.
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So I look at January for Mango and I look at August,
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we're starting at right around 100,000 and we're going up to almost 500,000.
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It looks like it's right in the middle there.
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So the fact that we're starting here,
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I'm going to say it's going to increase by 350,000 because remember we're starting at almost 200,000.
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So I'm going to say 350,000 pairs.
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Following this, I'm going to talk about the plateau.
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So again, I'm right here in August and I'm talking about this plateau.
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So this is a great word to talk about something that just remains the same.
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I'm going to say they will plateau until November and will finally show a positive rise,
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which is going to be right here in November up until December.
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So I'll say they're going to show a positive rise in December to end the year at,
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and I want to say approximately, because it's not quite clear.
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So I'm going to say approximately 600,000 pairs.
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And there we go.
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So that is everything I wanted to say for Mango.
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And now we're going to focus on Jack and Jones.
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There's a little bit more that I wanted to say about Jack and Jones.
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So again, I'm going to not say regarding, but I'm going to use another way to talk about something specific.
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And so I'm going to say, in terms of Jack and Jones, they will begin and end the year.
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Because remember we talked about outselling in the beginning and end.
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So I'm going to say they will begin and end the year outselling Mango by, and I want to look at how many pairs.
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Now it looks like 900,000 is the end for Jack and Jones.
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And we said that Mango was around 600,000.
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So that's about 300,000 as a difference.
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So I'm going to say they're going to outsell Mango by 300,000 pairs at the end.
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So I'll just write that here.
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Then I do want to talk about this sales dip that I talked about in February.
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So I will say, however, since this introduces a contrasting piece of information,
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sales will dip in February to about 250,000.
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Because if you look here in February, it goes down.
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It's not quite at 300,000.
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It decreases to about 250,000 before increasing to around 400,000 in June,
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because you see how it starts quite low in February.
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But then in June, you're right around 400,000.
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So I'm going to write 400,000 in June.
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And then I wanted to talk about that stagnation of sales.
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So I'm going to say after June, basically sales will stagnate until August.
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So my next sentence will say then sales are expected to stagnate until August.
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And then I wanted to talk about the increase.
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So after that, I will say Jack and Jones companies sales will more than recover in September and October.
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And I see that in September and October, they're going to sell around 600,000 pairs.
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So I'll say selling 600,000 pairs of jeans in both months.
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This is interesting because it stays the same for September and October.
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So I'm going to say both months.
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Keep in mind, this is not necessarily a plateau like we saw in mango,
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just because it's for a shorter amount of time and it comes right after a decrease.
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So this is actually an increase.
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It's a steady increase.
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It doesn't stay like this for too long.
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So then I'm going to talk about the ending months and I'll say in the subsequent months,
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a steady rise is predicted and sales will hit a peak of,
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again, this says approximately 900,000 and it isn't exactly clear.
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So I'm going to say a peak of approximately 900,000 by the close of the year.
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And there you have it.
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I have talked about all of my information that I wanted to include for Jack and Jones in the second body paragraph.
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It is normal that one paragraph is a little bit longer than the other.
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It really depends on the information you have.
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So with Mango, it was pretty clear.
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We saw a plateau.
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We saw a steady increase up until August.
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However, with Jack and Jones, there was actually much more to talk about because you see a dip
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and then you see a steady increase and then it just keeps increasing.
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And that seemed to be a more interesting piece of information.
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It was a more interesting group in terms of all the changes.
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So that's why it's a bit longer.
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So this is our essay.
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Now I'm going to show you a cleaner version with different types of language that we can analyze.
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Okay, now we can really analyze this for its language and its word count.
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I've looked at all of these words and the word count here is 172 words.
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That's perfect.
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We have fulfilled our minimum and we've gone a little bit over, but not too much.
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So we've definitely fulfilled what we have to say.
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Now I've separated some important words and phrases by color.
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Let's look at blue first.
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This is synonyms and topic vocabulary.
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So this is specific to this writing prompt.
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There aren't so many things here.
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We have predicted sales, which is what we saw here in the prompt.
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We saw estimated sales, but predicted sales is another way to say that.
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The more you're able to paraphrase and provide synonyms, the more your examiner will understand that you've got a rich vocabulary,
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and this will definitely help you in terms of the lexical resources that you're using.
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So try to use synonyms as much as you can.
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You see here Turkish customers.
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This was a different way to say customers from Turkey or customers in Turkey.
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So using the adjective here.
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And also we see outselling mango.
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That is very specific to estimated sales.
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So the more you study and practice your synonyms, the more these will be at the ready for you.
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And it'll just be more natural to use these synonyms.
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When it comes to useful vocabulary and phrases for the writing task one,
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we have a lot of great things that would work for this specific bar chart because it's treated as a line graph, but also line graphs in general.
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So we see that the chart predicts an upward trend.
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This is great.
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This is a way to say the increase that we see here
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and predicted to is wonderful because we're talking in the future.
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This is a prediction.
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So you really have to make sure you understand the writing prompt because we're not talking in the present or the past.
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This is the future.
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So these are all predictions.
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In our first body paragraph, it says the sales will increase by, so this buy is very important.
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Make sure you know that they will come together.
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If you didn't have buy and you just had increased 350,000 pairs,
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you would lose points on your lexical resource because that's just not the correct way to say it.
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Plateau is another great way to talk about something that is stagnant for more than two months, like we saw here.
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And show a positive rise is another way to say an increase.
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And then approximately is a great way to just say around because we don't know exactly the correct numbers.
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We just have this y-axis as a guide.
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Then in our second body paragraph for more useful vocabulary, a dip.
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This is great.
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So we use this for Jack and Jones in February.
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It's a very sharp decline.
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So a dip is a great way to say that.
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Stagnate is another great way to say that it is steadily increasing, but it's just a bit stagnant.
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It isn't anything too exciting.
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And then in the subsequent months, so in the following months,
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a steady rise, which is exactly what we talked about from September to October, and then hit a peak.
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So this is the highest point, like we saw for Jack and Jones, which is around 900,000.
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When it comes to the important functional words, let's look at red.
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These are great things for just organizing your information and your paragraphs and really just making it flow.
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So in our overview paragraph, we have overall because we're talking in general.
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Then in our first and second body paragraphs, when we want to get into more detail or talk about something specific.
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We can say regarding, or we can say in terms of, and then to talk about a process or to say something next,
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you could say following this when you want to include a contrasting argument or a contrasting piece of information.
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However is a great word to use.
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And then you can also say then when you want to continue, it's very similar to following this and you just continue on with your information.
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So you see how all of these synonyms, useful vocabulary, and functional words really help make your essay a success.
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This is a high-scoring essay because of the four scoring parts.
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We have the task achievement.
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This definitely fulfills the task.
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It reports on the main features.
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It makes relevant comparisons.
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It does so with a minimum of 150 words.
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The second part is it's coherent.
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It is cohesive with our foolproof outline.
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So you've got these different paragraphs.
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It's easy to read and it makes sense.
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And then the last two parts, the lexical resource and the grammatical range are also excellent here.
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We have a nice variation of words.
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We've talked about this in the future tense as was necessary.
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So keep in mind that your outline
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and all of your preparation work will really help you organize your essay and make it a success.
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I took a bit longer today because I just wanted to show you the reasons that I was writing certain things, and I wanted to show you the lines.
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But with practice, I guarantee you that you can do this quickly.
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You should be spending about 20 minutes on this.
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Now, the next example is going to show you something similar, but it is, of course, going to be a bit different.
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Let's speed it up a little bit and we'll show you the preparation work and a model essay.
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Okay, so we have our second example for today.
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It looks to be a bit more complicated and we see three different bars for each year.
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So let's read our prompt and see exactly what we're dealing with.
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It says the chart below shows the total number of minutes
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in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002.
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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Of course, we have 150 words as a minimum.
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Now, just looking at this chart, like I said, it looks to be a bit more complicated because we've got three categories per year.
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This is exactly what we're looking at, though.
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We have our years on the x-axis here and the minutes in billions on the y-axis.
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So don't worry about this.
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We can still approach this like we did the first example.
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We're going to look at it as a line graph in order to understand exactly what we're dealing with.
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And so here we are.
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I've just included how I would draw these lines.
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So let's take a look at this.
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We see first this gray type of bar is local fixed line.
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So basically I have traced the general curve and you see that it starts as an increase and then it decreases.
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So I've used this in red to show you what that looks like.
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Our second category is national and international fixed line, which is in our white bar.
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And that is a steady increase.
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And then we have mobiles, all calls in the black bar.
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And that also is a slight increase from 1995 to 2002.
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Now, this is extremely important because whenever students see three different categories with a bar chart like this,
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they tend to get nervous about how they're going to group this information.
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And since we've just analyzed the chart, we can see that there are two very different groups.
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The first group is a decreasing in the local fixed line, and the second group has the steady increasing,
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which would be national and international fixed lines and mobiles, all calls.
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So in this case, I would start out by writing about national, international fixed calls, and mobiles.
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I would have the white and the black bars as one group, and then our second grouping will be the local fixed line, which you see here in gray.
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That's just because we are grouping them based on the trend.
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One is decreasing and one is increasing.
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So I'm going to start with the first grouping and I'm just going to make notes about it.
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So I'm going to say national and international plus mobiles.
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And for my second grouping, I'm just going to say local fixed line.
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Now, in terms of things I want to say for national and international and mobiles, I want to talk about how we see a gradual increase for both.
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So for both national, international fixed line and mobiles, this is the biggest thing I'm going to talk about.
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And when we look at our essay, you will see how I've included the numbers
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because I am going to give examples in terms of numbers and in terms of dates, but this is the main thing you would have to understand for this first group.
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The second group, on the other hand, is going to look a little different because they have a different trend.
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So for local fixed line calls, which is going to be the topic of my second body paragraph, I'm going to talk about how it rose steadily.
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I'll talk about how it was a peak at around looks like 90 billion.
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So I'll put 90 billion here just to remind myself.
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And then I'm going to talk about the gradual decline up until 2002.
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And this is it.
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So you really don't have to freak out about grouping things that have three categories.
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In this case, you just want to look for a trend
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because I can guarantee you there is going to be some sort of trend that you can group together.
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And now speaking of trend, we're just going to finish up our step one and really just talk about a general trend.
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We're not talking about details.
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The details, remember, are in our body paragraphs.
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So in general here, I'm just going to talk about local fixed line calls.
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I'm going to talk about the peak and then the decline.
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and then when it comes to national and international calls, I'm going to talk about the gradual rise,
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specifically focusing on mobile calls rising towards the end.
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Now again, my notes are abbreviated.
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This is just to remind me of what I've planned when I write out the essay,
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but keep in mind that we were sort of able to combine all of the various points in step one.
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I was able to immediately see the overall trend just by drawing these lines for each category.
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And I was able to also see the overall trend just by looking at our groupings more in depth.
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So that's really all it takes.
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The more you practice, the more these things will jump out at you quite quickly, and you'll be able to see this right away.
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And now I'm going to show you the model essay.
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Okay, so we have our essay here on the right hand side.
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We're going to read it together while paying attention to these color coded words.
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So we have blue synonyms and topic vocabulary, green useful vocabulary and phrases, and red important functional words.
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So remember we have our introduction statement right here, which is basically just paraphrasing the prompt.
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And it says the bar chart illustrates the total number of
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calls in the UK in billions of minutes with three call types over an eight year period from 1995 to 2002.
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Basically here I've added eight-year period because I see 1995, 2002, and call types.
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So we see here telephone calls, three categories.
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I've basically just said call types because that is what these three categories are.
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Very short and simple and to the point.
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Our overview paragraph here talks about the general trend.
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So a nice way to introduce that is to say on the whole, local fixed line calls reached a peak by the middle of the period,
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which is true here, and then gradually declined.
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National and international calls showed a gradual rise over the whole period, so from 1995 to 2002,
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with mobile calls rising considerably toward the end of the period.
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This is the general overview.
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Notice that a whole period is a good way to say the entire eight-year span.
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And all of these things in green are great for line graphs and also for these types of bar charts.
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Now our first body paragraph, which is talking about national and international plus mobile calls,
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says with regards to national and international fixed calls, along with mobile calls.
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Mobile calls stood at around 2 billion minutes in 1995.
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Over the next four years, they showed a gradual increase, which is exactly what we see here,
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with a marked increase in call numbers from 2000 to 2002.
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National and international fixed calls showed a similar pattern, which is here in white,
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starting at just under 40 billion minutes of calls in 1995,
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then rising steadily to around 60 billion minutes of calls in 2002.
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So notice how I have stood at.
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Again, we're talking all in the past because this is 1995, 2002.
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So it stood at is a great way to just say what it was around 2 billion minutes in 1995,
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for example, then showing a gradual increase.
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You want to show that it was not sharp.
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And then a similar pattern is what we see with the national and international calls.
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And then a rising steadily is another way to say that it was quite gradual.
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Now our second grouping for fixed line, it says turning to local fixed line calls.
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This is a great way to shift focus.
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So turning to local fixed line calls in 1995,
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they began at slightly over 70 billion minutes and rose steadily to a peak of 90 billion.
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So this is the highest point, the peak, 90 billion minutes by 1999.
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However, from 2000, the trend showed a gradual decline in numbers of calls,
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ending in 2002 at the same amount as the start of the period.
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So we made a note that said 2002 was equivalent basically to what we saw in 1995.
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So note that, however, is also a great functional word.
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It shows a contrasting point.
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And if you take a look at all of this color-coded language, you see that we use a lot of great lexical resources.
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Our grammar was excellent as well in the past tense.
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And in terms of the task achievement, everything has been answered.
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Our word count is 200.
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So we've definitely fulfilled the 150-word minimum while elaborating as necessary, but not going overboard.
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And of course, it is coherent.
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It's cohesive we have used the excellent foolproof outline, which makes sure that everything is organized and makes sense.
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Again, like I said, with more practice and time, you'll be able to do all of this quickly and really use your 20 minutes in a very efficient way.
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Excellent job.
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Let's wrap up this lesson.
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All right, let's wrap up bar charts part two, which was looking at years on the x axis.
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When looking at do's and don'ts, first thing you want to do is, of course, analyze your chart as a line graph.
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It's not very different from a line graph, so keep that in mind.
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It's always helpful to draw a line like I did to really understand the bars that you see.
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Then you want to plan how to group the information, just like we did, into our body paragraphs and also understand your trends.
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Is there an increase?
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Is there a decline?
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Is there perhaps a little bit of both?
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You'll have to write this.
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And remember, you can actually combine the various aspects of step one, so be on the lookout for that.
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And then you want to organize your essay just like we did with the various groupings and the trend.
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Things you don't want to do, definitely don't start writing your essay immediately.
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You want to make sure you are allotting the appropriate amount of time to outline and then write.
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So the more you practice, the more you'll understand various trends that will pop out at you and different ways to group your information.
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So don't worry if you're taking things a little bit slowly right now, just practice, practice, practice.
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It really makes perfect when it comes to time management.
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Of course, you don't want to write the wrong amount.
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We stayed at our 150 word minimum and went up to 200 in our last example.
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You don't want to stray too far from that because you don't want to spend too much time on this task.
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And of course, don't get confused over the numerous bars.
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I'm talking specifically about our second example where we had three categories per year.
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Don't worry about it.
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Just stick back to this first tip with analyzing your chart as a line graph,
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and that should definitely help you understand trends to group things more efficiently.
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excellent job today this was a tricky type of bar chart go ahead and visit us at www.bestmytest.com
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slash IELTS to see more examples of bar charts and more strategy
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and practice tests
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when it comes to IELTS we'll be waiting for you here until then I'll see you for the next lesson
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and have a great day

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