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so i got over 70 in every single essay at uni
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and i want to show you how i did it look the truth is i think
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that the way
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that most of us approach our essays is a joke it doesn't make any sense whatsoever
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so i've decided to share my experience writing essays at uni
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because i believe there's a more efficient reliable and systematic way to approach essay writing and achieve top grades
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ultimately writing an essay should be a fun process as you're
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literally given the best possible opportunity to demonstrate your knowledge and explore ideas without limit.
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So I've broken up my approach into five stages that I'm going to share with you today.
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The first stage of anyone's essay writing process should begin with the goal in mind,
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which I'm guessing for most of us is to get a first.
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Now I'm always surprised by how many people literally have no idea what it takes to get a first,
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especially as we're told every single year what the criteria is to get that grade.
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And it's these criteria that we need to keep in mind whenever we're planning
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and writing our essays as this is what we're going to be judged on.
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Broadly, most people would agree that the basic elements of a first -class essay include four things.
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Firstly, close attention to the question and answering that question with breadth and accuracy with no or almost no significant errors or omissions.
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Secondly, detailed knowledge of the topic addressed as well as a deeper understanding of the context in
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which that topic exists and also the greyer, less well -known and less obvious areas of the law.
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Thirdly, we've got the presentation of theoretical arguments concerning the subject, significant critical analysis of relevant sources,
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and also a thoughtful personal perspective on the debate.
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Finally, we need a well -developed and compelling argument coupled with an excellent standard of writing.
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So in short, then, all we really need to do is to one, understand the question, two, research the topic well,
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three, have our own opinion on the topic, and then finally write a convincing argument on that topic
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and with this goal in mind
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and with this four -step process it becomes ridiculously easy to work through our essays in a systematic way
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which essentially ensures a first class grade at the end of it.
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So with all that in mind let's begin with step one of the process which is understanding the question.
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So the key to successful our essays then is really the ability to understand and address the question at hand.
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Now this may seem like stupidly obvious advice
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but it's crazy how often students will simply just ignore the question they'll misinterpret the question
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or they'll answer a completely different question simply
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because it's easier for them to answer
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that question instead for example let's say
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we're faced with the essay question what is a constitution many
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students in this situation will begin by outlining the nature
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and sources of the british constitution but this isn't actually what the question is asking
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and you know neither is asking us to list different categories
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of constitution instead what it's really telling us to do is
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to find different definitions of constitution such as i don't know a document containing the rules of government
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or the fundamental and supreme laws of the state and
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so on and so forth and then using those definitions to try
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and find the fundamental concepts that make up a constitution the problem is
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that we're just
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so keen to demonstrate our knowledge we begin to answer the questions in a very general way to try
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and prove how smart we are But this doesn't work at all.
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So what should we do?
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Well, the very first thing
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that I like to do whenever I'm faced with an essay question is to write it down on a piece of paper,
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fully deconstruct that essay question, and then try to understand the type of question that's been set.
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So let's say, for example, we're given the following essay question.
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The British constitution is unwritten, informal and flexible.
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Indeed, it could be argued that there is no constitution.
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Discuss.
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First, then I'll think about the type of question that's being asked
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and some questions are going to ask us about substantive legal topics like contract law, criminal law, tort law and so on.
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Some questions are going to be about legal concepts like I don't know justice, the rule of law and things like that
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and then we've also got questions around institutions like the courts
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and the constitution for example and then we've also got those questions which are a bit more analytical and descriptive.
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They want us to analyse specific areas of the law.
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So this question here then is specifically asking us about our understanding of a particular institution, i .e the constitution,
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and for us to analyse whether or not it actually exists.
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So the first thing that I do
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when answering this question is to begin by defining what a constitution is and what it should contain.
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And I'm always sort of bearing in mind, what are the great areas of law
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that this question is asking me to tackle
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and in this particular question it's quite clear that they're asking me to tackle the concept of constitutionalism.
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I'll then move on to discuss the term unwritten,
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informal and flexible with respect to the British constitution and compare that to a constitution that is written,
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rigid and more formal and sort of have a look at whether
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or not you know the requirements of rigidity and formality are necessary components of a constitution too.
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I could then at this stage provides some evidence
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that the british constitution does in fact exist like we have a established
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systems of government we have established principles of constitutional reform
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and things like that but i also need to bear in mind that this is a discussion.
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And we need to provide a discussion around the other side of the argument too.
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So are there any reasons where the British constitution could be said to not exist?
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And that could have arguments such as there is a lack of a fundamental supreme law, there's sovereignty of parliament instead of sovereignty of the constitution,
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and so on and so forth.
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Hopefully by deconstructing the essay in this way,
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we begin to get a really nice high level overview of what our essay is going to look like
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which gives us the perfect starting point to begin our research
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and begin deepening our understanding of the topic right we're now ready to do some research
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but to ensure we're not wasting any time reading useless material
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there's some preliminary work we now need to do basically we need to get out a word document
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or any other document that we use to do our research
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and structure that page in a way that's going to help us do our research properly
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and the way that we do this is to use something known as the minto pyramid principle
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so the idea here is that ideas should form a pyramid under a single thought
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and that single thought is essentially our thesis
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or our answer to the question
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and then under our single thesis we have supporting arguments
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and under the supporting arguments we have pieces of evidence backing it up.
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With that in mind then the way
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that we want to structure our page is using the same headings as we find in the Minto pyramid.
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So whenever we're doing our research we just slot that information into
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and under the relevant headings on that page and gradually we're going to start developing a very comprehensive essay structure.
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One thing I always try to do before I start researching the essay question is to write out a thesis statement.
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I may not 100 % know exactly how I'm going to answer the question
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but I usually have a vague idea of the position I want to argue
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and I use this as my starting point to begin my research.
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So let's take a look at an example
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and here we got the question critically assess the impact of the Human Rights Act 1998 on the British Constitution
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and this is probably the approach I'll take to this question.
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I'd start by reading my own notes and I'd also consult a textbook
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or two and basically try to understand as much as I can about the law and the relevant issues in that area.
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So for this particular question then I'll be thinking of the things like why the act was passed
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and how it changed the law,
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its central provisions and leading cases and more specifically the basic constitutional concerns and dilemmas that the act has impacted on.
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I'll also access
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and read the central provisions of the act to make sure it's all consistent with my knowledge
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and what the textbooks are saying.
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Now at this point I probably have a pretty good understanding of the different points
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I want to make in my essay having read everything I can about the topic
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so the point now is really to begin fleshing out each of the main substantial points
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I want to make in the essay using the further readings, finding critical evidence
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and also critical thought from other academics at this stage
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i guess i'll probably also want to consult some very specific texts about the topic
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that i'm discussing
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so i don't know probably a specific book on the human rights act a specific book on constitutional reform
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and that way i really do understand exactly what i want to talk about
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when i come to writing my essay
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and then i guess the final stage for me is really to boost my critical understanding and analysis of the law.
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And this really means consulting things like journal articles
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so I can see what academics are saying about that area of the law, as well as consulting a lot of primary sources too.
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So for this question, it'll be things like looking at the leading cases decided under the Act, the provisions of the European Convention of Human Rights,
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and I guess things like that.
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So this will really help me to find detailed supporting evidence and criticism of the main points that I want to make.
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The analysis stage doesn't take very long at all
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but for me this is the biggest difference between those
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that get a second class grade in their essays and those
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that get a first class grade so it's very much worth spending some time doing this properly.
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Now by this point
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we should have a pretty good understanding of the different arguments on both sides of the debate
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and we should also have a pretty good understanding of
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which side of the fence that we sit on to
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which hopefully supports the thesis statement that we made at the beginning of the process.
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The plan now then is to go through all the counter arguments
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that cropped up during our research phase
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and to inject our own thoughts into those counter arguments as to why we can reject them
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or why potentially they lack weight.
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Here we're not really expected to have the same level of knowledge
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or insight as a professor or lecturer
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but we are expected to appreciate the arguments that they make and then also make relevant observations and criticisms of their work.
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And to be honest with you we can be pretty clumsy in our analysis.
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The important thing is we're trying to make a decent attempt at analysing death statements and analysing the law too.
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So as long as we've done that we're going to be rewarded pretty well.
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Now I'm not going to go into too much detail here
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but the underlying point is
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that we should always finish the research phase by thinking deeply about the topic
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and determining what do we exactly think about the question at hand.
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Okay so by this stage we should have a really nice plan
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and we should be in a perfect position to begin writing our essay.
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And this all begins by starting with the introduction.
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And the whole point of the introduction is to answer the question
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and to make sure the examiner or the marker knows we understand the legal concepts.
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So we want to keep it brief.
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We want to address those legal concepts.
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And we essentially, and most importantly, want to make sure we make a very clear thesis statement.
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I think one of the biggest mistakes
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that a lot of students make is to try
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and keep the introduction as mysterious as possible and sort of leave their thesis to the conclusion.
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But this is a really bad way to write essays
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because it essentially means that we are putting our sort of evidence up front
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and then waiting to make the statement in the conclusion.
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But the way to make our writing as clear as possible is
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that we want to make the statement first and then show supporting evidence later.
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So we want to have a very clear thesis statement in the introduction
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which is backed up by supporting evidence throughout the essay and not the other way around.
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This is quite literally the hardest part of writing the essay.
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I probably spend like 25 % of my time writing the introduction
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because I know if I nail the introduction it sets the tone for the rest of the essay
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and it also makes sure that the point I want to make is really really clear.
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So once I've written the introduction the plan now is to write the main body of our essay
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and this is actually a really easy process once we've done our research.
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Now I know this video is about how to write essays
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but really 90 % of the writing process for an essay comes in the research phase
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because once we've made and done really good research all we're really doing is turning
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that research into full prose in the essay body.
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So what we want to do is take the main headings and the supporting arguments and put those into our essay structure.
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So we've got the main points that support our thesis
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and we've got the evidence that supports those main points and hey presto we have our main body sorted.
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Finally we finish up with the conclusion
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and all we're really doing here is giving a brief overview of the legal concepts
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that we covered and also restating the thesis statement
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that we made at the start
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and as a sort of insider piece of knowledge here I'll try to make this as good as possible
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because a lot of the time what markers
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and lecturers will do is they'll turn to the conclusion first
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before they've read the rest of the essay to make sure you really understood and answer that question properly.
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So yeah that's about it.
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If you want to see what a really good essay looks like with comments as to why that essay is so good,
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then make sure you check out the link in the description below.
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If you've got any questions about your own essays,
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then also drop questions and comments below and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
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And hopefully I'll see you next time.
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Goodbye.

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คำศัพท์คำอ่านความหมาย
essay คำนาม/ˈɛs.eɪ/ความเรียง, ข้อเขียน
topic คำนาม/ˈtɑpɪk/หัวข้อ, กระทู้
thesis คำนาม/ˈθisɪs/วิทยานิพนธ์, ปริญญานิพนธ์
consult คำกริยา/ˈkɑnsʌlt/ปรึกษา, หารือ
fundamental คำคุณศัพท์/ˌfʌn.dəˈmɛn.təl/พื้นฐาน, เบื้องต้น
pyramid คำนาม/ˈpɪɹ.ə.mɪd/พีระมิด
argue คำกริยา/ˈɑɹ.ɡju/เถียง, ถก
institution คำนาม/ˌɪn.stɪˈtʃuː.ʃən/สถาบัน
principle คำนาม/ˈpɹɪn.sɪ.pəl/หลัก, คติ
demonstrate คำกริยา/ˈdɛm.ənˌstɹeɪt/สาธิต
flexible คำคุณศัพท์/ˈflɛk.sɪ.bəl/ยืดหยุ่น
informal คำคุณศัพท์/ɪnˈfɔɹ.m(ə)l/ไม่เป็นทางการ
sovereignty คำนาม/ˈsɑv(ə)ɹənti/อธิปไตย
textbook คำนาม/ˈtɛkst.bʊk/ตำราเรียน, ตำรา
lecturer คำนาม/ˈlɛkt͡ʃəɹə/อาจารย์

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โครงสร้างในวิดีโอ
Present perfect have/has + กริยาช่อง 3 — เหตุการณ์ในอดีตที่ยังเกี่ยวข้องกับปัจจุบันi've decided · I've broken · that's been set
Passive voice be + กริยาช่อง 3 — เน้นสิ่งที่เกิดขึ้น ไม่ใช่ผู้กระทำbe judged · been set · could be argued
Relative clauses who / which + อนุประโยค — ข้อมูลเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับคนหรือสิ่งของprocess which is · questions which are

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ผู้พูดใช้รูปย่อและรูปลดเสียง 60 ครั้ง เช่น we're, I'll, I'm ให้พูดแบบสั้นตามที่ได้ยิน

  • เสียง “th”: thesis /ˈθisɪs/, theoretical /ˌθi.əˈɹɛt.ɪ.kəl/, thoughtful /ˈθɔːtfəl/, breadth /bɹɛdθ/, thirdly /ˈθɚdli/
  • เสียง “sh” และ “zh”: essentially /ɪˈsɛnʃəli/, conclusion /kənˈkluːʒən/, constitutional /ˌkɒn.stɪˈtjuː.ʃ(ə)n.(ə)l/, provision /pɹəˈvɪʒ.ən/, institution /ˌɪn.stɪˈtʃuː.ʃən/
  • คำยาว — ลงเสียงหนักให้ถูกพยางค์: essentially /ɪˈsɛnʃəli/, constitutional /ˌkɒn.stɪˈtjuː.ʃ(ə)n.(ə)l/, fundamental /ˌfʌn.dəˈmɛn.təl/, institution /ˌɪn.stɪˈtʃuː.ʃən/, systematic /ˌsɪs.tɪˈmæt.ɪk/

เสียงที่คนไทยมักออกเสียงยาก:

  • เสียงท้ายคำ — ออกเสียงให้ครบ ไม่เปลี่ยนเป็นตัวสะกดแบบไทย: thesis /ˈθisɪs/, constitutional /ˌkɒn.stɪˈtjuː.ʃ(ə)n.(ə)l/, fundamental /ˌfʌn.dəˈmɛn.təl/, principle /ˈpɹɪn.sɪ.pəl/, tackle /ˈtækəl/
  • /v/ — ไม่ใช่ /w/ ให้ฟันบนแตะริมฝีปากล่าง: provision /pɹəˈvɪʒ.ən/, overview /ˈoʊ.vɚˌvjuː/, sovereignty /ˈsɑv(ə)ɹənti/, comprehensive /ˌkɑm.pɹəˈhɛn.sɪv/, convince /kənˈvɪns/
  • /z/ — เสียงก้อง ไม่ใช่ /s/: presentation /ˌpɹɛzn̩ˈteɪʃn̩/, observation /ˌɑbzɚˈveɪʃn̩/, prose /ˈpɹoʊz/, examiner /əɡˈzæmɪnɚ/, clumsy /ˈklʌmzi/

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  3. อัดเสียงตัวเองแล้วเทียบกับต้นฉบับ โดยสังเกตคำอย่าง essay, topic, thesis เป็นพิเศษ

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