쉐도잉 연습: 4 Steps to a Perfect English Paragraph: The P.E.E.L. Method - 영상으로 영어 말하기 배우기

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My name is Emma, and I want to help you with your writing.
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Today, we are going to learn a way to organize your writing to help you with your essays,
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with things like TOEFL, IELTS, or even university and high school essays.
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So, what we're talking about is something called called the PEEL framework.
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So, the first thing I want you to do is forget using AI to write your essays.
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You can do this.
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You can write.
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So let me teach you about PEEL and how it can help you with your writing.
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PEEL stands for point, example, explain, and link.
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We're going to look at each of these parts of PEEL in more detail, and then we're going to look at some example paragraphs.
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I can't wait.
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I love using PEEL and I think you will too.
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So, the P in PEEL stands for point.
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So, what is the point of what you're writing?
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So, we often use PEEL when we're writing paragraphs,
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especially paragraphs where we're trying to make an argument or to give our opinion on something.
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So, when I'm talking about point, what I'm really saying is the first sentence you state the main idea.
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So, here's an example of how you might start off an essay.
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So, imagine somebody asks you to write about exercise and students.
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Your point might be, exercise is important for students because it improves both their physical and mental health.
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Okay, so that's an example of a topic sentence, and these are just some words that can be helpful when you write,
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when you're giving the point.
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I think that, I think that exercise is very important for students.
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One important idea is exercise can help students' mental or physical health.
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In my opinion, exercise is critical for student well -being.
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Exercise for students is important because it helps them physically and mentally.
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So there's some different examples of how to use these types of words.
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They're great words at the start of a paragraph, especially for IELTS, TOEFL, and high school paragraphs.
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So, now let's look at the E in PEEL.
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The first E in PEEL stands for example.
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So you've already given your point, now you need to back it up with an example.
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So give evidence or an example to prove your point.
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So here are some great words that you can use to help you do this.
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You can say, for example, for instance, one example is, this can be seen when,
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so going back to our exercise point,
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my point was that exercise is important for students' physical and mental well -being, so that's my point point.
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For example, regular exercise can reduce stress and increase energy levels.
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So I'm giving a real example to support my point.
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So you give the point, then you follow it up with an example.
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Alright, let's see what the next E in the Peel Method means.
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The next E in PEEL, so the second E, stands for explain.
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So the next thing you do when you're writing a paragraph is you explain your example more deeply,
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so you go into more detail.
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Here are some words that can be helpful for that.
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This means that, as a result, because of this, this helps because.
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So, going back to our example from the beginning where I mentioned exercise is important for students' physical and mental well -being,
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and then I gave an example about how exercise can help with energy.
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Now, I'm going to talk about that a little bit more.
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So, as a result, students often feel more focused and perform better in class, so I'm giving more detail from the previous example.
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And that's what you want to do.
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So you give an example, for instance, and then you give.. more detail or more of an explanation.
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Alright, and we will look at more examples in a moment, but let's now get to the final letter in PEELE, which is the L.
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What does L stand for?
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So, the L in PEELE stands for link.
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You need to link back to the main point.
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So, you've done your point, you've given an example, you've explained your example,
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and now it's time to go back and link it back to the initial point.
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So these are some great words to do that.
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Therefore, for this reason, overall, this shows that.
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So let's look at an example of this.
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Going back to our original point about exercise, the very last thing I can write is,
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therefore, exercise can help students succeed both academically and personally.
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So, now let's look at the whole paragraph together
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so you can see how well it flows when you use the Peel method.
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All right, so now let's look at the whole paragraph.
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Exercise is important for students because it improves both physical and mental health.
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For example, regular exercise can reduce stress and increase energy level.
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As a result, students often feel more focused and perform better in class.
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Therefore, exercise can help students succeed both academically and personally.
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Boom.
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Great paragraph.
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All right.
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Thank you, Peel Method.
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Way better than AI.
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All right.
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So now let's look at another example paragraph we can write together.
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All right.
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So let's practice another paragraph together.
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I have here some sentences for a Peel paragraph, but they are not in the correct order.
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So, I want you to find where is the P, which stands for point, where is the E,
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which stands for example, where is the E, which stands for explain, and where is the L, which stands for link.
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All right, so let's look at what the paragraph says, and then you can organize it in the correct way.
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As a result, investment in public transport can improve urban life.
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This decreases the number of private vehicles on the road and shortens travel times.
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One major benefit of public transportation is reduced traffic congestion.
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For example, cities such as Tokyo have efficient subway systems used by millions daily.
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All right, so that paragraph is out of order.
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Take a moment and try to put it in order using the Peel method.
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So what's the point, the main idea?
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What's the example given?
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Where is the explanation for the example? example, so the more detail of the example.
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And where's the link, linking it back to the main point?
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Alright, so now let's look at how this paragraph should be organized.
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How to make it a PEAL paragraph.
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So what's the point, or the P?
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The point is, one major benefit of public transportation is reduced traffic congestion.
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So that's the main idea.
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What about E, the example?
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For example, cities such as Tokyo have efficient subway systems used by millions daily.
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And that one kind of gave us a hint, the word for example.
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Okay, what about explain?
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So where's the analysis of this?
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This decreases the number of private vehicles on the road and shortens travel times.
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Okay, and now we need to go for the link.
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What's the link?
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The mini -conclusion, we could say.
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As a result, investment in public transport can improve urban life.
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So this would have been a great paragraph for things like the IELTS or the TOEFL, or just, you know, there's a lot of different tests
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or situations where you might need to write a basic essay
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this is a great example of a paragraph you might have in an essay.
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All right. So, PEEL.
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Remember that.
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What does it stand for?
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Point, Example, Explain, and Link.
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Alright, so there you have it.
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That's the PEEL framework.
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So thank you so much for watching.
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I hope you learned something.
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Feel free to check out our website at www .engvid .com and there you can practice what you learned in today's video.
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And remember, practice makes perfect.
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It can really help you to really master these skills and apply them to your writing.
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You can also subscribe to my channel.
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We have lots of videos on all sorts of different topics related to English.
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So thank you so much for watching
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And until next time, take care.

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이 말하기 레슨은 영상 “4 Steps to a Perfect English Paragraph: The P.E.E.L. Method”을(를) 바탕으로 합니다. 가장 자주 반복되는 단어는 다음과 같습니다: example, paragraph, Peel, exercise, student. 이 영상에는 섀도잉할 문장 125개와 단어 1364개가 있습니다. 말하는 구간의 길이는 10:47입니다. 화자는 분당 약 127단어의 일정한 속도로 말해서 섀도잉하기에 편한 속도입니다. 단어의 89%가 영어에서 가장 많이 쓰이는 3,000단어에 속해 어휘가 쉬운 편입니다.

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영상에 나오는 익혀 둘 만한 단어 12개를 발음, 뜻과 함께 정리했습니다.

단어발음뜻
paragraph 명사/ˈpæɹəɡɹæf/단락
essay 명사/ˈɛs.eɪ/수필, 에세이
organize 동사/ˈɔɹɡənaɪz/조직하다
topic 명사/ˈtɑpɪk/화제, 주제
explanation 명사/ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/설명
efficient 형용사/ɪˈfɪʃənt/효율적인
subway 명사/ˈsʌbˌweɪ/지하철, 전철
deeply 부사/ˈdi(ː)pli/깊이
skill 명사/skɪl/기술, 스킬
conclusion 명사/kənˈkluːʒən/종결
hint 명사/hɪnt/힌트, 실마리
subscribe 동사/səbˈskɹaɪb/구독하다

영상에 나오는 구동사

단어뜻
go back 동사돌아가다

이 영상의 문법

화자가 가장 많이 쓰는 문형을 영상 속 실제 표현과 함께 정리했습니다.

문형영상 속 표현
수동태 be + 과거분사 — 누가 하는지보다 무슨 일이 일어나는지에 초점can be seen · is reduced · should be organized
현재완료 have/has + 과거분사 — 과거의 일이 지금도 관련이 있을 때you've already given · you've done

주의할 발음

화자는 I'm, we're, you've 같은 축약형과 약화된 형태를 19번 사용합니다. 들리는 대로 짧게 발음하세요.

  • “sh”와 “zh” 소리: explanation /ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/, efficient /ɪˈfɪʃənt/, conclusion /kənˈkluːʒən/, shorten /ˈʃɔɹtn̩/
  • 긴 단어 — 강세 위치에 주의: explanation /ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/, academically /ˌæk.əˈdɛm.ɪk.ə.li/

한국어 화자가 어려워하는 소리:

  • /f/ — ㅍ(/p/)으로 바꾸지 말고 윗니를 아랫입술에 대기: paragraph /ˈpæɹəɡɹæf/, helpful /ˈhɛlp.fl̩/, efficient /ɪˈfɪʃənt/, framework /ˈfɹeɪm.wɜːk/, physically /ˈfɪz.ɪ.kli/
  • /z/ — ㅈ이 아니라 성대를 울리는 /s/: organize /ˈɔɹɡənaɪz/, physically /ˈfɪz.ɪ.kli/

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