Pratique du Shadowing: 4 Steps to a Perfect English Paragraph: The P.E.E.L. Method - Apprendre l'anglais à l'oral avec la vidéo

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My name is Emma, and I want to help you with your writing.
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Today, we are going to learn a way to organize your writing to help you with your essays,
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with things like TOEFL, IELTS, or even university and high school essays.
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So, what we're talking about is something called called the PEEL framework.
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So, the first thing I want you to do is forget using AI to write your essays.
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You can do this.
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You can write.
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So let me teach you about PEEL and how it can help you with your writing.
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PEEL stands for point, example, explain, and link.
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We're going to look at each of these parts of PEEL in more detail, and then we're going to look at some example paragraphs.
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I can't wait.
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I love using PEEL and I think you will too.
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So, the P in PEEL stands for point.
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So, what is the point of what you're writing?
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So, we often use PEEL when we're writing paragraphs,
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especially paragraphs where we're trying to make an argument or to give our opinion on something.
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So, when I'm talking about point, what I'm really saying is the first sentence you state the main idea.
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So, here's an example of how you might start off an essay.
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So, imagine somebody asks you to write about exercise and students.
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Your point might be, exercise is important for students because it improves both their physical and mental health.
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Okay, so that's an example of a topic sentence, and these are just some words that can be helpful when you write,
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when you're giving the point.
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I think that, I think that exercise is very important for students.
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One important idea is exercise can help students' mental or physical health.
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In my opinion, exercise is critical for student well -being.
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Exercise for students is important because it helps them physically and mentally.
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So there's some different examples of how to use these types of words.
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They're great words at the start of a paragraph, especially for IELTS, TOEFL, and high school paragraphs.
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So, now let's look at the E in PEEL.
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The first E in PEEL stands for example.
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So you've already given your point, now you need to back it up with an example.
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So give evidence or an example to prove your point.
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So here are some great words that you can use to help you do this.
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You can say, for example, for instance, one example is, this can be seen when,
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so going back to our exercise point,
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my point was that exercise is important for students' physical and mental well -being, so that's my point point.
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For example, regular exercise can reduce stress and increase energy levels.
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So I'm giving a real example to support my point.
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So you give the point, then you follow it up with an example.
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Alright, let's see what the next E in the Peel Method means.
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The next E in PEEL, so the second E, stands for explain.
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So the next thing you do when you're writing a paragraph is you explain your example more deeply,
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so you go into more detail.
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Here are some words that can be helpful for that.
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This means that, as a result, because of this, this helps because.
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So, going back to our example from the beginning where I mentioned exercise is important for students' physical and mental well -being,
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and then I gave an example about how exercise can help with energy.
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Now, I'm going to talk about that a little bit more.
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So, as a result, students often feel more focused and perform better in class, so I'm giving more detail from the previous example.
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And that's what you want to do.
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So you give an example, for instance, and then you give.. more detail or more of an explanation.
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Alright, and we will look at more examples in a moment, but let's now get to the final letter in PEELE, which is the L.
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What does L stand for?
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So, the L in PEELE stands for link.
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You need to link back to the main point.
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So, you've done your point, you've given an example, you've explained your example,
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and now it's time to go back and link it back to the initial point.
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So these are some great words to do that.
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Therefore, for this reason, overall, this shows that.
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So let's look at an example of this.
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Going back to our original point about exercise, the very last thing I can write is,
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therefore, exercise can help students succeed both academically and personally.
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So, now let's look at the whole paragraph together
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so you can see how well it flows when you use the Peel method.
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All right, so now let's look at the whole paragraph.
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Exercise is important for students because it improves both physical and mental health.
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For example, regular exercise can reduce stress and increase energy level.
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As a result, students often feel more focused and perform better in class.
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Therefore, exercise can help students succeed both academically and personally.
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Boom.
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Great paragraph.
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All right.
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Thank you, Peel Method.
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Way better than AI.
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All right.
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So now let's look at another example paragraph we can write together.
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All right.
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So let's practice another paragraph together.
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I have here some sentences for a Peel paragraph, but they are not in the correct order.
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So, I want you to find where is the P, which stands for point, where is the E,
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which stands for example, where is the E, which stands for explain, and where is the L, which stands for link.
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All right, so let's look at what the paragraph says, and then you can organize it in the correct way.
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As a result, investment in public transport can improve urban life.
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This decreases the number of private vehicles on the road and shortens travel times.
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One major benefit of public transportation is reduced traffic congestion.
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For example, cities such as Tokyo have efficient subway systems used by millions daily.
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All right, so that paragraph is out of order.
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Take a moment and try to put it in order using the Peel method.
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So what's the point, the main idea?
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What's the example given?
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Where is the explanation for the example? example, so the more detail of the example.
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And where's the link, linking it back to the main point?
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Alright, so now let's look at how this paragraph should be organized.
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How to make it a PEAL paragraph.
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So what's the point, or the P?
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The point is, one major benefit of public transportation is reduced traffic congestion.
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So that's the main idea.
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What about E, the example?
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For example, cities such as Tokyo have efficient subway systems used by millions daily.
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And that one kind of gave us a hint, the word for example.
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Okay, what about explain?
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So where's the analysis of this?
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This decreases the number of private vehicles on the road and shortens travel times.
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Okay, and now we need to go for the link.
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What's the link?
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The mini -conclusion, we could say.
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As a result, investment in public transport can improve urban life.
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So this would have been a great paragraph for things like the IELTS or the TOEFL, or just, you know, there's a lot of different tests
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or situations where you might need to write a basic essay
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this is a great example of a paragraph you might have in an essay.
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All right. So, PEEL.
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Remember that.
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What does it stand for?
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Point, Example, Explain, and Link.
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Alright, so there you have it.
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That's the PEEL framework.
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So thank you so much for watching.
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I hope you learned something.
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Feel free to check out our website at www .engvid .com and there you can practice what you learned in today's video.
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And remember, practice makes perfect.
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It can really help you to really master these skills and apply them to your writing.
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You can also subscribe to my channel.
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We have lots of videos on all sorts of different topics related to English.
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So thank you so much for watching
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And until next time, take care.

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Cette leçon d’expression orale s’appuie sur la vidéo « 4 Steps to a Perfect English Paragraph: The P.E.E.L. Method ». Les mots qui reviennent le plus souvent : example, paragraph, Peel, exercise, student. Cette vidéo contient 125 phrases et 1364 mots à répéter en shadowing. La partie parlée dure 10:47. Le locuteur parle à un rythme régulier d’environ 127 mots par minute, confortable pour le shadowing. 89 % des mots font partie des 3 000 mots les plus courants en anglais, le vocabulaire est donc facile à suivre.

Vocabulaire clé de cette vidéo

15 mots de la vidéo à retenir, avec leur prononciation et leur sens :

MotPrononciationSens
paragraph nom/ˈpæɹəɡɹæf/paragraphe, alinéa
essay nom/ˈɛs.eɪ/essai, rédaction
organize verbe/ˈɔɹɡənaɪz/organiser
topic nom/ˈtɑpɪk/sujet, thème
explanation nom/ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/explication
helpful adjectif/ˈhɛlp.fl̩/utile, serviable
efficient adjectif/ɪˈfɪʃənt/efficace
decrease verbe/dɪˈkɹiːs/diminuer
subway nom/ˈsʌbˌweɪ/métro, métropolitain
congestion nom/kənˈd͡ʒɛs.t͡ʃən/embouteillage, bouchon
deeply adverbe/ˈdi(ː)pli/profondément
skill nom/skɪl/habileté, compétence
conclusion nom/kənˈkluːʒən/conclusion, fin
physically adverbe/ˈfɪz.ɪ.kli/physiquement
mentally adverbe/ˈmɛntəli/mentalement

Les verbes à particule que vous entendrez

MotSens
check out verbemater, regarder
go back verberentrer, retourner

La grammaire de cette vidéo

Les structures que le locuteur utilise le plus, avec les mots exacts de la vidéo :

StructureDans la vidéo
Voix passive be + participe passé — l’accent est mis sur ce qui arrive, pas sur qui le faitcan be seen · is reduced · should be organized
Present perfect have/has + participe passé — une action passée qui compte encore maintenantyou've already given · you've done

Prononciation à surveiller

Le locuteur utilise 19 contractions et formes réduites, comme I'm, we're, you've. Prononcez-les sous leur forme courte, telles que vous les entendez.

  • Les sons « sh » et « zh »: explanation /ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/, efficient /ɪˈfɪʃənt/, conclusion /kənˈkluːʒən/, shorten /ˈʃɔɹtn̩/
  • Mots longs — placez bien l’accent: explanation /ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən/, academically /ˌæk.əˈdɛm.ɪk.ə.li/

Les sons difficiles pour les francophones :

  • /h/ — il se souffle, il n’est pas muet: helpful /ˈhɛlp.fl̩/, hint /hɪnt/
  • /r/ anglais — langue recourbée, sans frotter la gorge: paragraph /ˈpæɹəɡɹæf/, alright /ɔlˈɹaɪt/, organize /ˈɔɹɡənaɪz/, framework /ˈfɹeɪm.wɜːk/, decrease /dɪˈkɹiːs/

Comment s’entraîner avec cette vidéo

  1. Écoutez la vidéo en entier une fois sans parler et notez les mots que vous ne connaissez pas.
  2. Répétez phrase par phrase à vitesse normale, en reprenant chacune jusqu’à ce que votre rythme corresponde à celui du locuteur.
  3. Enregistrez-vous et comparez avec l’original, en faisant attention à des mots comme paragraph, essay, organize.

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