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Today, I would like to talk about the harm of instant noodles.
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Today, I would like to talk about the harm of instant noodles.
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Many young people love them because they are cheap and fast to cook.
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When you come home late at night or feel too lazy to make rice,
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a hot bowl of noodles feels like the best answer.
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The taste is salty and rich,
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the smell is strong, and you feel happy in that moment.
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However, eating them too often can make your body weak.
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Instant noodles do not give enough vitamins and the soup has a lot of oil and salt.
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Some students eat them almost every day and later they feel tired and heavy.
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Doctors say we should eat more vegetables,
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rice, and fresh food if we want to stay healthy.
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Instant noodles can be fun sometimes,
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but they should never become our main meal.
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์™œ ์ด ์˜์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?

์ด ์˜์ƒ์€ ์ธ์Šคํ„ดํŠธ ๋ˆ„๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์œ ์ตํ•œ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ๋งฅ๋ฝ์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ Š์€ ์„ธ๋Œ€๊ฐ€ ์ธ์Šคํ„ดํŠธ ๋ˆ„๋“ค์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ์™€ ๊ทธ๋กœ ์ธํ•œ ๊ฑด๊ฐ• ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณผ์ •์—์„œ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ์˜ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์‰๋„์ž‰ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•™์Šต์ž๋Š” ์ด ์†Œ์žฌ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์‹ค์ œ ์‚ถ์—์„œ์˜ ๋Œ€ํ™”์— ์ง์ ‘ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์ตํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ, ์ด ์˜์ƒ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด shadow speak ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ์œ ์ฐฝํ•œ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋ฌธ๋งฅ ์†์˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„

  • Present Simple Tense: "Many young people love them." ์ด ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๋ฌผ์ฃผ์–ด์™€ ํ˜„์žฌ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•™์Šต์ž๋Š” ์ด ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Conditional Sentence: "If we want to stay healthy." ์กฐ๊ฑด๋ฌธ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์‹์Šต๊ด€์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์ด๋Š” ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Adverbial Phrases: "almost every day." ์ด๋Ÿฐ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๋นˆ๋„๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์Šต๊ด€์ด๋‚˜ ํ–‰๋™์˜ ๋นˆ๋„๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋ฐœ์Œ ํ•จ์ •

์ด ์˜์ƒ์—์„œ ์ฃผ์˜ํ•  ๋ฐœ์Œ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ, "noodles"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋ฐœ์Œ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค๊ณผ ํ˜ผ๋™๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐœ์Œ ์‹œ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ธ์ง€ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๋ฐ˜๋ณต ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, "rich"์™€ "weak"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์€ ๋ฐœ์Œํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์žˆ์–ด ์–ด์ƒ‰ํ•จ์ด ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ ์ฃผ์˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฐœ์Œ ํ•จ์ •์„ ๊ทน๋ณตํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฌ์šด ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์‰๋„์ž‰์ด๋ž€? ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ณผํ•™์  ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•

์‰๋„์ž‰(Shadowing)์€ ์›๋ž˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ํ†ต์—ญ์‚ฌ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ๋œ ์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์Šต ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ, ๋‹ค์–ธ์–ด ํ•™์ž์ธ Dr. Alexander Arguelles์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋Œ€์ค‘ํ™”๋œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์›๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉด์„œ 1~2์ดˆ์˜ ์งง์€ ์ง€์—ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒโ€”โ€”๋งˆ์น˜ '๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ž(shadow)'์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํ™”์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ณต๋ถ€๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜๋™์ ์ธ ์ฒญ์ทจ์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ, ์‰๋„์ž‰์€ ๋‡Œ์™€ ์ž… ๊ทผ์œก์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์‹ค์‹œ๊ฐ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฐœ์Œ ์ •ํ™•๋„, ์–ต์–‘, ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ, ์—ฐ์Œ, ์ฒญ์ทจ๋ ฅ, ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ ์ฐฝ์„ฑ์„ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์ค€๋น„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์˜์–ด ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŠนํžˆ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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